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Hahah, I love this, O. I think it describes a little part of you. In light of the moment, I've decided to play "Tiny Vessels" for your review. ;) Yes, ...

Hey there JD.. This was a pretty good piece you have here, but it could have been better in some ways. Mostly I only caught a few mistakes in the ...

This was so sweet. I loved it. :) It was nicely written, apart from the grammatical errors. But I will not nitpick at those now. I'll simply go straight into ...

Overall, I think this was very nicely written as far as the idea of being married under such pressure. Marriage is a pressure alone, but the idea that it's during ...

Hey there rains :) Overall, this was pretty good. But I did find many little mistakes in grammar, which became sort of disruptive as I was reading, and took away ...

Hey there. Here to lend a review for you. :) Delina,is the angel of my heart. (I noticed throughout your writing you have no space between commas. You should go ...

Okay, I'm not quite sure what to make of this, but I have to say, it was funny. Like a sleep deprived art student all hopped up on caffine and ...

Hello there :) Japan huh? Great inspiration for writing. I have to be honest, I'm not the biggest expert on lyrics. I use to have a friend that was nuts ...

This makes me miss middle school. That's when I got all these fluttering feelings about my best crushes. Heat is the perfect title. I remember the feeling, and you took ...

I love how you made your concept of spring revolve around the flowers. It set the perfect mood of the season. My favorite stanza was this: Petals open slowly, shyly ...

Hey there, here to lend a review for you. :) The sight of your face, flawlessly sculpted, sends a burst of sunshine erupting sparks within me.   Those eyes, when ...

This was a really nicely written poem. Something about it was almost imperfect in a way. But it worked. The flow had it's own rhythm. It's what I liked most ...

I envy you're ability to articulate yourself so flawlessly. Once again, I am smitten. xP I do have a few questions though. 1.) Is the main character a man or ...

Love this. Speechless. ('Nuff said) (^-^).. The message is like something I would want to write about. (Although, I'm 99% sure I wouldn't've been able to articulate myself in nearly ...

Hey Confictura :) Here to lend a review for you. First off, I liked this. It had character. I didn't find myself falling bored as I was reading through it. ...