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Thank you for your honesty, I've been going through a rough time lately and I probably could not of picked a worse guy as my muse. I know my writing ...

I've been really trying to write lately, but when your muse is well, not being helpful, it gets hard. Thank you for your criticism. I'll use your tips, but as ...

Thank you for your kind words :) I'll start being more descriptive and revising my poems for often.

Yeah, I'll work on being more descriptive. Sometimes when I write I just put thoughts onto paper and it doesn't really come out as a poem. Sometimes I could be ...

Thank you! That's what I was going for. This poem is a very personal poem to me and when I write, I put myself into to my poems. I'm glad ...

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I love the thoughts that you have put into this poem. The message is clear, and you produce it in both a deep way but also an easy way to ...

Thanks for the honesty! :) When I write I don't really edit my work because when I do, I over think things and sometimes I take away from the meaning. ...

I absolutely love it. Just as awesome as I expected no critique needed here! :)

I really like the imagery in this piece. You put real emotion into this. I know I keep repeating imagery in my reviews but imagery is the base to a ...

I like this poem. If the first few lines were clearer it would enhance the poems meaning but I too very much like the last two lines. I like the ...

I love it. I can relate to it, I wouldn't change anything. Amazing job! :)