SkyeJane

Yay! Thanks for the nice stuff!! I honestly didn't notice the harpoonst things because I wrote this in 15 minutes. It does not have music just yet I'm working on ...

Glad I could help and oops sorry! Umaima...ok I've got it!!

Thank you so much! It makes sense what you said but because it was a personal thing I'm not sure if I would change it. But thanks for everything else!!

I found you!!! And I remember this!!!!! No more caves!!!!!!!!!!! Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!!!! And this poem rocks!! Can I turn it into a song!!!!? please.

All I'mm gonna say is this reminded me so much of the Beach Boys or the Mamas and the Papas....a really cool hippy,fun vibe. Maybe that's not what you wanted ...

Yaaaazaaaayyyy!!!!! So mine or yours?

Solly my dear, all I can say is we are more alike than I had previously imagined. And I love this song!!

Thanks Aqua, and no no gifts....... It says song somewher I think but.. I'll see. Thanks for the "big ups".

Ok I see the changes now and I think it makes it a lot clearer. I specialise in lyrics myself so I love to review them and give as much ...

Hi Dream. I am Skye and I happen to love your song! It really gives a clear picture and fills me with a wonderful feeling. The whole song is just ...

Hey there! This has a lot of also has a need for some work. I think that you can take this song much further if you look at some minor ...

Thanks Aqua I understand! It does say where the chorus is but I should probally specify the other bits.But I will work on it more that's why I wanted you ...

Just so you all know this is my dad's song that he never finished.It's really my take on it and I feel as if it can live through me.Most of ...