SkyeDreamer

This is beautiful, and I really hope my sister (the other contest judge) likes it! This was so powerful, yet still peaceful. It took me back to the ocean at ...

Love the rhymes. Love the message. Love the wording. Ready for this full review? No promises that this is a winner (in the contest), but it is incredible and has ...

Hi, here to review for the contest! Well, here we go! Her frail, white body glides across the snow cold room. Pale grey eyes watch you, waiting for something. Good ...

*like* So, at first, I was thinking, "Why is this featured? It is really pretty, but there doesn't seem to be anything... extra- special." Then, by probably the 3rd stanza, ...

Hey, here to review! Overall, nice work, although you used a lot of commas where they were not needed. Anyway, here we go (my comments will be blue)... It's where ...

As a "real" literary piece, the ending wasn't as strong as it could've been, and it was a little short. As a "just for fun" story, though, I loved this! ...

Loved this story! I thought part one was a little funnier, where this one was more about the storyline. But that's not a bad thing, at all. The Ben Affleck ...

This was very interesting. The major nitpicks have been pointed out, except for one. along with their friend Mr. A.S. Neil who is a good friend of theirs. Their friend ...

I haven't read part one, but I thought this was very good. My one problem with it is the last paragraph; the whole piece was so strong, then this seemed ...

Aww, I loved this! I really liked the idea that you had everything dear to you in one box, then you ended with the Bible... As a fellow Christian, I ...

I really liked this! Even though you had no punctuation, your poem was still easy to follow and flowed well... which sometimes doesn't happen. My favorite parts were: You’re so ...

I liked this poem a lot. I don't really have any critiques; I just wanted to say that this was really good. As a side note, there have been a ...

Nice for a beginning poem, but... maybe you jumped in to the deep end too soon. :/ I liked what you were trying to do here, but it was a ...

Whoa! Where did that ending come from?! I mean that in a good way, though. I thought the descriptions were perfect, a good balance of plot and imagery. Nice work! ...

I liked the way you used the shoe to mean something more. Good message, and the poem was fun to read. One thing: your rhymes didn't always... well, rhyme. You ...