Skye

I listened to the whole playlist while I was washing the floors today. Excellent stuff! :D

Thank you all, especially Isis -- your insight is quite honestly invaluable. I'll be sure to work through this a bit more, especially the line-breaks you mentioned.

If you don't mind, I'll come back to look at this new version when I happen to have time. *Will edit crit in here*

Wow, those are some reviews! Thank you thank you thank you to everyone who looked at this. Clau : The lack of capitalization on my part is just a matter ...

Ew. So this is what I wrote like three freaking years ago. *cringes* Please. No crits. Just let this one die.

I figured you had a good reason -- again, it was a very enjoyable read. :)

Twenty-four! :D I like the list; very comprehensive. The one's I haven't read yet are all on my list for the future as well. Skye approves.

Haha, I find it amusing that the one poem that I want to be buried at the very end of the list gets the most attention. :P Anyways, thanks all ...

Darling, you were supposed to let me know when you updated! Now I have about a bazillion chapters to crit! I just finished reading them all, and I must say ...

Thanks El! *gives soup* :) Iambic pentameter is where there's 10 syllables on each line in a stressed/unstressed pattern, so it ends up sounding sort of lyrical. Shakespeare is a ...

It's the horrific Iambic Pentameter that's scaring everyone away, isn't it? :P

This is really amazing. Seriously. The second-to-last line could be a little iffy, but by then the reader has (hopefully) realized what you were doing, so it's okay. Fabulous.

Cute indeed! Believable characters/dialogue as well. I just read your post about play writing, so I'm wondering if this is what you ended up with for your class?

Okay, I guess I'll explain the title. At the time when I wrote this, I was at a bit of a block, so I decided to write about my favorite ...

This is so sad. :( Beautifullly written; it's simple but still gets the point across. Great job.