Skye

Mmh... You have a sexy voice. ;) This was a fabulous poem, both out loud and on paper, which seems to be a rare accomplishment indeed. No criticism, just love.

I agree with Jiggity, having the angel on the "bad" side is a cool little touch. In fact, I liked the whole thing, just... For example, there was the time ...

I, too, am not a big fan of the italicized paragraph. Sure, it sounds pretty, but it doesn't add much to the story, in my opinion. If you want to ...

You might want to rate this... I like it. One thing: in a jungle that bawls with barrels of laughter This line was...weird. Bawling laughter? That was the only thing ...

A pretty clear (if dark) picture is protrayed here. Beautiful. One thing: all filling in the empty spaces, all covering up with jewels and lace Maybe it's just me, but ...

I'm with Fand. I absolutely loved the book (I just finished it yesterday, as a matter of fact!) and the playful yet frank tone of the book. Jiggy - I ...

Strange, but it has the potential to be quite addicting. After reading it through the second time it made a lot more sense, though there were still a few blank ...

the 3rd in this year alone the 5Th one in my lifetime I agree with niteowl, these lines are quite distracting. It would help if you made it "third" and ...

This is really an amazing poem. And it is accessible, just like lovekills said, *because* it's so personal. I love it. One thing: you may want to separate this one ...

Wow. It's really a shame that this doesn't have more responses. First off, I'd like to say this is absolutely gorgeous. I especially loved the second-to-last stanza; it's a great ...

Wow. This was absolutely amazing! The parts in French are beautifully written, and sound especially good in such a gorgeous language. I'm sorry that I really have nothing to critique, ...

I really liked this! Right from the beginning, you hooked me in with those two lines, which also set the tone nicely for the rest of the poem, by the ...

I really liked this. It was raw and passionate and very...palpable? Is that the word I'm looking for? I think so. This is especially meaningful because my mom's best friend ...

Oh, this is definitely very true, but I think you could have used more imagey in writing this. There isn't anything that particularly stands out; it just sounds like plain ...

Ooh, I really like this a lot! Like Bobo said, the mix between realistic and deeply emotional was great. Overall, it was a strong poem from beginning to end, and ...