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Re: Stuck
Heyo its SkyJayde! I'm here to leave a review! First off, what grabbed my attention was the title "Stuck" it made me think, how are you stuck? emotionally? mentally? maybe ...
Aug 12, 2024 -
Re: Bliss Was Ignorance: Chapter 1
Heyo this is SkyJayde! I'm here to leave a review! First off, I love the title of this segment it's very interesting and immediately hooks the reader into a world ...
Aug 12, 2024 -
Re: The perfect Valentine’s Day gift…
Heyo! It's SkyJayde and I'm here to leave a review! First off, I like how you added a little context of what the story is based upon before diving into ...
Feb 6, 2024 -
Re: Our dreams at the dusty table
Heyo. I'm here to leave a review. Before I begin: This short story is filled with suspense and mystery. The main character (I'm assuming. Correct me if I'm wrong) Daisy, ...
May 31, 2023 -
Re: Douma, a Despicable Villain (Demon Slayer)
Heyo! I’m gonna review your piece. Now before I begin: I love this character review and the character. This review you’ve made is great. It gives a little more insight ...
Apr 24, 2023 -
Re: I Let Critics Have Their Way with Me
Heyo! I’m gonna review your piece. Before I begin: This poem is full of emotion. It’s pure and in a way it describes the everyday criticism writers receive when they ...
Apr 10, 2023 -
Re: Angel
Heyo! I’m gonna leave a review. Before I begin; This is a great horror story. The beginning reels in the reader instantly which is a great quality to have in ...
Apr 5, 2023 -
Re: The love of a family
Heyo! I’m gonna review your piece. Before I begin: I love this story! It’s so heart warming and happy. To be honest, I don’t write or read stories like this ...
Apr 5, 2023 -
Re: In my head
Heyo! I’m gonna review this piece. Before I begin; The title really fits this poem. I like how it’s filled with emotion and gives a little peek into what’s going ...
Apr 3, 2023 -
Re: Frost - Prologue
Heyo! I’m gonna review this piece. Before I begin; This story is wonderful! Love how it starts with a 9-1-1 call. It was right in the middle of the action ...
Mar 29, 2023 -
Re: Conqueror Rising: A Prologue [old]
Heyo! I’m gonna review this wonderful piece. Before I begin, I want to say the story was just as interesting as it sounds. I love the characters names by the ...
Mar 29, 2023 -
Re: Crybaby and the clown-Alphabet Boy goes bye bye (Chapter One)
Heyo! I’m gonna review your piece. Before I begin, I want to say I love your idea of a crossover, makes it more interesting. Now let’s get into the review; ...
Mar 28, 2023 -
Re: I love (hate) you, father (William’s song for Lucas)
Heyo! I’m gonna review these beautiful lyrics. Before I begin, I wanted to say these lyrics are beautiful. They hold some much meaning. Great work. Now let’s get to the ...
Mar 28, 2023 -
Re: Blood and Water
Heyo! I’m gonna review your piece. Before I begin, I wanted to say the ending made me want to cry. It was so heartfelt and pure with emotion. Great work. ...
Mar 27, 2023 -
Re: Time & Space (Part 1)
Heyo! I’m gonna review your piece. First off, wonderful story. The beginning reels in the reader. Welcoming them to the fantasy realm I would say. Second, I think it would ...
Mar 27, 2023
