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Skittles

  • Soul Sister Blues Remix, review ASAP, (English Class!)

    This is a short story i had to write for my english honors class. we were supposed to write about a special gift and the person who gave it to ...

    6 min read
  • Root Beer Float

    This is something that i just started typing up. i was bored and this kind of fell out of my mind. please feel free to comment and review.SkittlesEverything was covered ...

    8 min read
  • Spring Fever

    This is something i decided to write today. this was based on my actual art class in school. oh and this didn't really happenPlease feel free to review or comment. ...

    10 min read
  • The Dream Snatcher

    Okay I revised and edited so it should be okay now. You all can still critique if you like though... The Dream Snatcher~ The sky is no longer a light ...

    4 min read
  • What do you think? Chapter 1 (rewrite)

    I think i got most of the grammer mistakes. Please feel free to review and or comment though. I think this is going nicely for me, although i would still ...

    3 min read
  • The Runaway

    Please feel free to comment and review on my short story...God i love this website!Lewis Parker sat on the curb of a street. He was only six and he was ...

    3 min read
  • Thunder (prologue & chpt. 1) foul language

    I have already edited....written over...forgotten...refound...this story...its up to you guys if this has any hope. Most of you have probably read this thing over six times (I really don't know) ...

    12 min read
  • Witches of Algernon (Please review)

    Please help me and review my work. I want to become a better writter. I also want to know if this is a good start to my story? Thank you ...

    17 min read
  • Revenant (The rest of the other chapter has been added)

    Please feel free to critque. I've been submiting a few things to see which one of them had the better chance. Here's one of my favorites...Hope you guys like it! ...

    16 min read
  • Witches of Algernon (Part 1 of chpt. 2)

    I Didn't have time to write the rest of chapter two since I am currently working on another story (Revenant, with Natalie Fletcher) for a dear friend of mine...Hope you ...

    4 min read
  • The Painter's Daughter

    Please review, i'm hoping this is good, haven't been on the sight in a long time, been focusing on yeah... have fun

    12 min read
  • Tales of a Traveler

    So this isn't quite done yet, so bear with me...i just want to know if it's worth continuing. Chapter I Two men walked with growing pace within the dreaded depths ...

    10 min read
  • The Night King prologue(revised)

    Prologue~King Taranis plunged his sword into the Wicked’s stomach, releasing as much magic as he could through his blade. The Wicked writhed in pain, his screams ignored by the rest ...

    17 min read
  • The Night King Chapter I-partI

    This is just part of chapter one, i didn't know if it was too long, and people alway complain and don't review if it's long, so i just made it ...

    14 min read
  • The Night King Chapter I-partII

    The sun beat down on the Adilyte’s black leather suits like millions of daggers, but they remained unaffected from the heat. Their king had set a goal, and in their ...

    5 min read
  • The Night King Chapter I-partIII

    Clara walked to Madame Alaxia’s with Luan by her side. Clara didn’t trust the witch with one fiber of her being, and Luan wouldn’t let his little sister walk alone ...

    11 min read
  • The Night King Chapter II-part I

    The presence was strong. It was a young woman and she was troubled and afraid. He wanted to reach out and help her, but she was intangible, only an existence. ...

    6 min read
  • Bladedancer- Prologue

    Please feel free to review! I've been trying to work on the beginning of this book, I think I found the best I could think of, since all other options ...

    11 min read
  • The Lantern is Lit

    Just something i worked on at three in the morning....couldn't sleep THE LANTERN IS LITThe lantern is litBrightening the path of the lostHung by the sleepless forestWhere it seems fitThe ...

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  • Fairies

    FairiesFairies flutter and flow above each cloudTheir hearts are golden, they are proudThey follow the trail of the saffron sun As it begins to slip beneath the day that’s doneGiggling ...

    2 min read
  • Locked From the Outside

    Locked From the OutsideThe old mansion is what I seekThe mysteries of lives long and forgottenWith secrets and hidden meaning that tempt meForest trees reach for me, telling me to ...

    2 min read
  • The Runaway

    The RunawayLewis Parker sat on the curb. It was nearly noon and the sun was at its highest, glaring down at him with a fiery intensity. It had been exactly ...

    9 min read
  • The Fate

    [Chapter 1] I died just like he said I would. No one even carried the slightest suspicion. But no one knew that I would be coming back ...

    4 min read
  • Sun Chaser

    A little boy, a little girl, and a deadly secret.

    29 min read


I always like to look on the optimistic side of life, but I am realistic enough to know that life is a complex matter.
— Walt Disney