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Re: Nothing Rhymes With Purple
Awesome job!
Feb 14, 2011 -
Re: (I'm) A Shadowed Girl
Nice poetry! Could you make it a tiny bit longer? Nice job anyway. Loved the story.
Feb 14, 2011 -
Re: Deleted
Wow great job! I like your work it's......................captivating. Keep writing!
Feb 13, 2011 -
Re: Silent Sentinel
I love this so much. When reflecting on my past, I sometimes come across this poem. It's sad. Your work is beautiful.
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Finally
Speechless again. I love the way it's so sad yet so wonderful.
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: The Stars
Awesome job. Love the way you portrayed the fact that no matter how much you long for the stars, you can never get close to them.
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Ramblings of a dead heart.
Amazing. Though sadness is not so bad if you enjoy it. (You wo'nt really understand what I just said unless you check my poem The Happiness of Sadness in 'other ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: invisible to you. :-(
Wow. Good job! If this is what you really feel or what really happened to you, I'm sorry. Maybe some deep meaningful words to paint it clearer?
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Promise
Beautiful. Maybe more specific words and feelings?
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Defend me, oh Chivalrous Knight (EXTENDED)
Love it. I love the part that says 'mirrored in the sword'' or something similar. I have often imagined seeing my reflection in a blade. I love the passion, the ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Consumed: Preface
Wow. That came to you as a dream? I am trying not to cry. Maybe some more meaningful words?
Jan 28, 2011 -
Re: When It Rains
Wow nice! LOVE IT. I love the rain.
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: Memory. (now in stanzas)
Firstly, thanks for commenting, secondly, I'm not too down. It's about my first BFF (that I really miss) when I moved house. Sadly, she wasn't at school on my last ...
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: The Flames of Hope
Love the title this is AWESOME!
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: Anger Splatters
Wow. This is the reason I follow you. (besides many other facts) you are amazing! Maybe some more meaningful words though...
Jan 27, 2011