SirenCymbaline

Hello. So I think this is meant to be a brief glimpse into a life, and you've got a lot here you can work with. I'll just get the technical ...

Hello. I like the descriptions of the setting, it's easy to picture where we are and what is going on. And not just the physical environment, but the social environment ...

Hello. I like that this is written in a way that makes is easy to visualise what is meant to be going on. The actions are conveyed clearly, and in ...

I have not reviewed in a very long time, but bear with me. I liked this so much that I really wanted to leave some sort of feedback. This story, ...

When I read this, I hear a beat and backing track playing in my head, something like The devil went down to Georgia. And that part about swearing until their ...

I see you could use a review. You got the punctuation-grammar-spelling-wordstuff review, now you need a story review. Something more than 'I really liked this keep up the good work'. ...

I only saw one mistake. 'I had too.' Yeah.. Also, just maybe 'I now had two choices. 1) Hide in the house, or 2) Carry on running.' It could read ...

I wonder who your inhuman/e subject may be? He certainly interests me, though I can steal none of his secrets between the lines, minus his ultimate weakness. The first paragraph ...

Nice job. It's simple, real, straight to the point, relatable. Sorry I couldn't write an actually helpful review.

Good stuff. I think I've bonded with your Shiloh takes a special character and a special writer to do that so fast. I love it. One chapter, and it sums ...

This is so brilliant, it is hard to review. Honestly. I DO NOT want you to change this. Any of this. The only part that needs editing is a few ...

I'm not very good at noticing words and grammar out of place, but I guess I may have a little for this story. It's a pretty, um, serious kind of ...

Before clicking on it, I thought 'Most Awesome Story Ever? that is a title that someone would use to make people read it. That is stupid, not even imaginative. WHY ...

OK. Maybe I should have reviewed this long ago. I share her confusion. No-one has explained anything. She has just woken up and she seems to have been checked by ...

Very good stuff. Very, very good stuff. Darkest piece I've ever seen. Not that I've seen everything. I like the title, it makes you wonder - is the bird just ...