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I couldn't wait to see my friends. We didn't talk on My Space or on the phone. I was so psyched to see my friends. I went to the bus ...

Heavens to Besty! I'm hear to review your works and a pice of mind! I like this story!! People need to be shown what happens inside a girl's head! They ...

ROFL :lol: ! I love this poem!!! I'm a poet myself and I think this poem is new and original!! I agree with Ben you rap? I know guys mostly ...

I love the warrior series! It's really funny that I was gonna write a story about RainClan!!! LOL :lol: !! I think you need more setting. Where are they? Describe ...

Hi there! I like your work and you did a SPLENDERIFIOUS job!! You need to have spaces in most places (I wont spell them out for you!) and your narrator ...

Wow so poetic! I don't agree w/ everyone else. I like it as a story! @yuriiko 1235 it's not almost is! I like how it is almost lke a poem ...

RK, Um........ Nice work. That's about all I have to say. It was an okay take off of that book.... I don't think you potrayed Kevin well. He finds this ...

The only thing I can say is that is it made me cry! You potrayed the characters feelings beautifully! I love your work. :smt005 :smt005 :smt005

Just a question. Are you friends with Victoria? 'Cause this poem is pretty harsh, but truthful. Please don't get apset! I love it! Great job! :wink: :elephant: :smt005 :lol: :D ...

Cool sci-fi story! I love the this sentence: That was the point, to weed out the lesser beings. Using death. Instead of her running legs were a throbbing red, maybe: ...

I like the subject of this poem. An innability to cry.... In the beginning, I like the flow and the rhymes. In the 4th paragraph last sentence, It sounded a ...

Wow. Amazing. How do u do it? You write about regular relationships and make it sound well...magical...poetic? My words fumble to grasp at how deep this work is. You should ...

dear TheWriters, I enjoyed your work even though it sounds sorta like The Looking Glass Wars. When you were writing about the beasts in the forest you forgot the S. ...

Dear mrschaos, you have a lot of spelling errors, but I think if you wrote it on purpose that would be cool! I don't really enjoy the first verse. It ...

Amazing, especially for the younger readers! A great poem too!!!! I love the rhyming though I write poems, I'm terrible w/ a capital T when trying to rhyme. Please look ...