Sins

Hey there :) I think that this is a pretty nice poem! There are some errors, as the other reviewers have pointed out though. Like Kamas said, you have a ...

Hey there :) Like Elinor and Tassen have said, this was a really nice little poem! As I take my last breath I also agree though with Elinor on the ...

Hey there Portersrose :) Awesome picture by the way :lol: This story was pretty good, in my opinion! It wasn't incredible, but it wasn't terrible either! One thing you do ...

Hey there Darkness :smt001 Everyone has pretty much pointed out every nit-pick, and they've pretty much mentioned everything else as well! So I'm just going to agree to what they've ...

Hey there :D I thought that you're poem was seriously good! I agree with Jasmine, the first line was extremely powerful, and it did make me want to read on. ...

This was pretty good! :smt001 I understand what Kaiden was saying, there just seems to be something missing. I think it might be partly to do with the fact that ...

Wow. That's amazing... So creative, so inspirational, so unique, so original, so unbelievable, so amazing! ... Sorry, I couldn't help myself :xd: I apologise if I've offended you... Seriously though, ...

Hey there :smt001 I noticed that you haven't done any reviews. I don't want to seem like an annoying nitpicker or anything, but as well as posting your own work, ...

Hey there :smt001 I have to say, I really enjoyed your poem! And I think that you have a really good writing style. I can't really think of anything to ...

Hey there :D Like icanbefixed, all I can really say to you is WOW! If I could write like this, I would have a darn good rave around my living ...

Hey there :smt001 Like Suzzane said, you should probably review some work. All though, I can't say much. When I first joined YWS, I had no idea what I was ...

Hey there! I agree with everyone else! I can't actually think of anything major in your poem to critique! Well done to you! *applaudes* Like yuriiko said, I love your ...

Heya :) Stelagineva has pointed out most of the grammar mistakes, so I won't say them again! All though, grammar isn't my strong point anyway, so I wouldn't listen to ...

Heya :) I actually agree with Elinor Brynn! I found your use of "it" effective. Everyone's entitled to their own opinion I suppose, eh? :wink: All though, at times, it ...

Hey x I quite enjoyed this XD I agree with the other comment that the story is rather confusing, maybe it's the first night of her job as a hooker? ...