Sinkingtooslow

Seriously, your poem ate my heart. I cannot tell you how much I can relate to this poem and how much I love it. Amazing imagery and just awesome....awesomeness. I ...

Ok. I know exactly what you are talking about. I have been working with Special needs children and adults since I was about 13 or 14. And I love the ...

Aw, I like this. If you are looking to work on it a bit, it might need a little tidying up. But it really is intriguing the way it is. ...

Wow. This is amazing! Really beautiful work! I'm so glad that I sat down to read this. Really, it was amazing. Thank you for posting this! But with the tricycle...did ...

It's actually pretty good. You rhyme really well too, I can see that from all of your poems. But perhaps a little work with rhythm and grammar could make this ...

I don't think the slight choppy-ness of the piece is altogether that bad, afterall, the sea is choppy. Oh, and Evening and Edges don't rhyme. ha just kidding. But really, ...

Well, I'm not really sure if I liked this... A few things.... I don’t want to smile; I don’t want to cry; Want to stay in my room; Away from ...

Aw, this was really good. It was sweet and simple and does sound like a lullaby. Very great work. So as you listen to this lullaby And the moon brings ...

This was a very fun, very entertaining poem! I love it! Very nicely done, perhaps it could use a little bit of touch ups here and there, but it seems ...

Alright, I don't disagree or agree with your stance on fireworks, but all the same, it was an interesting read. It was enjoyable to see you put your opinion into ...

hmmm... this poem irritated me, but in a good way! ha. It reminded me of the terrible noise of "silence" that one comes across in a library and such. Those ...

I loved the imagery in this poem! Some very nice descriptions... Words are mazes set in ink, ^A very good description! This really drew me into the poem. Good first ...

Aw, that's sweet. Yeah, I noticed the missing syllable too. No big deal. Yes, the original haikus are supposed to use nature as metaphors for other things or something like ...

Very well done and powerful. A few things that have already been stated, yeah, it should be "begun"... Also, I want it all to stop, Just freeze up time. I ...

That was cute. Personally, I despise it when I end up writing poems about not being able to write a poem. It hurts my head. :roll: But yeah... Oh look ...