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Re: I Can't Write Poetry
First of all, I love your poem here. You aren't the only one who has trouble with poetry, but this is definitely a good one. So you have finally jumped ...
Nov 20, 2015 -
Re: How to Attract Readers
Well, this is the shortest piece of writing I have ever seen on this site. Seriously, this was a good joke and the truth is your absolutely right. I fell ...
Nov 14, 2015 -
Re: If water were hate
This poem is really depressing. But still, what a beautiful poem. This poem is a very different way of looking at things, and is unique in its own way. I've ...
Nov 7, 2015 -
Re: The Beuaty of Wrtiing
I really enjoyed this poem, and I think I understand what your getting at. It's interesting that human beings have come up with a way to communicate and think of ...
Nov 7, 2015 -
Re: No One Is Alone
I really enjoyed your poem. I suppose it is about your life and the fact that that you feel paranoia over what people are saying, and it is saddening, but ...
Oct 24, 2015 -
Re: i will bleed you white
Well done, what a creepy poem. The imagery was superb, and the idea of bleeding someone "white" is interesting. The poem is beautiful in it's own bone white terrifying way, ...
Oct 24, 2015 -
Re: Not everyone dies gracefully
I would just like to say that I love your poem. The imagery was fabulous, although more than slightly morose. I could almost a picture of everything you described, and ...
Oct 24, 2015 -
Re: Not What It Looks Like
This was a short story. I really like what you did with it. I think that this is what would happen if batman ever lost to the joker. We always ...
Oct 24, 2015 -
Re: Beyond Words
Love is an amazing thing, even though pretty much no one can really completely understand it. I certainly can't. The way you express your feelings is perfect poetry, even if ...
Oct 14, 2015 -
Re: Travel Through Space
This isn't my favorite poem of all time because I'm not much for rhymes, but I still have to admit that it was good. I liked how it wasn't just ...
Oct 8, 2015 -
Re: A Bɿoken Яecoɿd
Wow. Just wow. The imagery in this story was amazing, and it had a beautiful rhythm to it. This is a poem that needs to be, and is, heard. What ...
Oct 8, 2015 -
Re: Deadogzza
This poem made me laugh very hard. I'm happy that there is something like this that I can turn to on this site to bring joy to my heart. This ...
Oct 8, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1
Hello Cherokee, nice story, although I found it a bit difficult to understand, I still enjoyed reading it. But I think that if you polished up your skills a little ...
Oct 1, 2015 -
Re: Sunset
I really enjoyed your poem, it was really quite beautiful. I really have trouble understanding and especially reviewing poems, but I'll give it my best. The imagery was great, painting ...
Oct 1, 2015 -
Re: Too Old For Toys
This was horribly depressing, but a great read. I think that the skill it took to paint the scene in my mind of the boy dropping the toy, was great. ...
Sep 30, 2015
