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  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: I Can't Write Poetry

    First of all, I love your poem here. You aren't the only one who has trouble with poetry, but this is definitely a good one. So you have finally jumped ...

    Nov 20, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: How to Attract Readers

    Well, this is the shortest piece of writing I have ever seen on this site. Seriously, this was a good joke and the truth is your absolutely right. I fell ...

    Nov 14, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: If water were hate

    This poem is really depressing. But still, what a beautiful poem. This poem is a very different way of looking at things, and is unique in its own way. I've ...

    Nov 7, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: The Beuaty of Wrtiing

    I really enjoyed this poem, and I think I understand what your getting at. It's interesting that human beings have come up with a way to communicate and think of ...

    Nov 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: No One Is Alone

    I really enjoyed your poem. I suppose it is about your life and the fact that that you feel paranoia over what people are saying, and it is saddening, but ...

    Oct 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: i will bleed you white

    Well done, what a creepy poem. The imagery was superb, and the idea of bleeding someone "white" is interesting. The poem is beautiful in it's own bone white terrifying way, ...

    Oct 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Not everyone dies gracefully

    I would just like to say that I love your poem. The imagery was fabulous, although more than slightly morose. I could almost a picture of everything you described, and ...

    Oct 24, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fanfiction Re: Not What It Looks Like

    This was a short story. I really like what you did with it. I think that this is what would happen if batman ever lost to the joker. We always ...

    Oct 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Beyond Words

    Love is an amazing thing, even though pretty much no one can really completely understand it. I certainly can't. The way you express your feelings is perfect poetry, even if ...

    Oct 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: Travel Through Space

    This isn't my favorite poem of all time because I'm not much for rhymes, but I still have to admit that it was good. I liked how it wasn't just ...

    Oct 8, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Bɿoken Яecoɿd

    Wow. Just wow. The imagery in this story was amazing, and it had a beautiful rhythm to it. This is a poem that needs to be, and is, heard. What ...

    Oct 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Deadogzza

    This poem made me laugh very hard. I'm happy that there is something like this that I can turn to on this site to bring joy to my heart. This ...

    Oct 8, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Science Fiction Re: Chapter 1

    Hello Cherokee, nice story, although I found it a bit difficult to understand, I still enjoyed reading it. But I think that if you polished up your skills a little ...

    Oct 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Sunset

    I really enjoyed your poem, it was really quite beautiful. I really have trouble understanding and especially reviewing poems, but I'll give it my best. The imagery was great, painting ...

    Oct 1, 2015
  • Short Story » Lyrical, General Re: Too Old For Toys

    This was horribly depressing, but a great read. I think that the skill it took to paint the scene in my mind of the boy dropping the toy, was great. ...

    Sep 30, 2015


You are going to love some of your characters because they are you, or some facet of you, and you are going to hate some characters for the same reason.
— Anne Lamott