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  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: I Can't Write Poetry

    First of all, I love your poem here. You aren't the only one who has trouble with poetry, but this is definitely a good one. So you have finally jumped ...

    Nov 20, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: How to Attract Readers

    Well, this is the shortest piece of writing I have ever seen on this site. Seriously, this was a good joke and the truth is your absolutely right. I fell ...

    Nov 14, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: If water were hate

    This poem is really depressing. But still, what a beautiful poem. This poem is a very different way of looking at things, and is unique in its own way. I've ...

    Nov 7, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: The Beuaty of Wrtiing

    I really enjoyed this poem, and I think I understand what your getting at. It's interesting that human beings have come up with a way to communicate and think of ...

    Nov 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: No One Is Alone

    I really enjoyed your poem. I suppose it is about your life and the fact that that you feel paranoia over what people are saying, and it is saddening, but ...

    Oct 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: i will bleed you white

    Well done, what a creepy poem. The imagery was superb, and the idea of bleeding someone "white" is interesting. The poem is beautiful in it's own bone white terrifying way, ...

    Oct 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Not everyone dies gracefully

    I would just like to say that I love your poem. The imagery was fabulous, although more than slightly morose. I could almost a picture of everything you described, and ...

    Oct 24, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fanfiction Re: Not What It Looks Like

    This was a short story. I really like what you did with it. I think that this is what would happen if batman ever lost to the joker. We always ...

    Oct 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Beyond Words

    Love is an amazing thing, even though pretty much no one can really completely understand it. I certainly can't. The way you express your feelings is perfect poetry, even if ...

    Oct 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: Travel Through Space

    This isn't my favorite poem of all time because I'm not much for rhymes, but I still have to admit that it was good. I liked how it wasn't just ...

    Oct 8, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Bɿoken Яecoɿd

    Wow. Just wow. The imagery in this story was amazing, and it had a beautiful rhythm to it. This is a poem that needs to be, and is, heard. What ...

    Oct 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Deadogzza

    This poem made me laugh very hard. I'm happy that there is something like this that I can turn to on this site to bring joy to my heart. This ...

    Oct 8, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Science Fiction Re: Chapter 1

    Hello Cherokee, nice story, although I found it a bit difficult to understand, I still enjoyed reading it. But I think that if you polished up your skills a little ...

    Oct 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Sunset

    I really enjoyed your poem, it was really quite beautiful. I really have trouble understanding and especially reviewing poems, but I'll give it my best. The imagery was great, painting ...

    Oct 1, 2015
  • Short Story » Lyrical, General Re: Too Old For Toys

    This was horribly depressing, but a great read. I think that the skill it took to paint the scene in my mind of the boy dropping the toy, was great. ...

    Sep 30, 2015


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