Silberfee

Hi! Thanks for the review, I have to admit I had concluded before that the foundation of poetry was rhythm but when I googled it up while writing this a ...

I did wonder whether it was referring to the society where a woman can never go out alone and can't take certain jobs (like train to a dr) because then ...

ah yes I was startled when i found your review just when I returned to the homepage and got a notification :P

Thank you so much for the review! I'll rewrite it and try to make the pronouns more clearer :) and maybe re-think about the dialogue, I wasn't sure what is ...

Thank you for the review! yes I joined last month I wish I knew about this site earlier, I feel kinda old (I'm in my twenties)... Yes I have stumbled ...

Thank you for the comment I haven't written a story for a long time so I didn't want to write anything too long until I became more confident with writing ...

Thank you for your feedback it was v helpful I have edited it.

no I think your idea is a ambitious one, it is very difficult (for me anyway) to write about countries and their relationships and I think the idea could be ...

ah yes I tend to overthink sometimes (I apologise!) and in this case I was looking for something more solid ... fundamentally there is nothing wrong with the structure, rhythm ...

Thank you so much ! It is quite hard to use child POV, bc it still has to be detailed but in a much simpler way. Hopefully I'll be able ...

Thank you so much for the review!! I was surprised to discover some members liked it but I was really worried because one can like a written piece but that ...

Thank you so much for the review! I was beginning to think this will get overlooked. If you do show it to your brother and if he has any suggestions ...

No problem ! ^^ I'm trying to review more stories so I can prepare to write my own (when I think of a plot :) )

I feel that the sentence In my teen age I never tried to be anyone's beloved. contradicts the content of the poem as the poem starts with stating that the ...

Context: I look Chinese (my disguise) but I don't speak Chinese so when I go to the city old Chinese ladies would shout after me in Chinese but I don't ...