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A nice lovely entry, I like it's simplicity. It's something that will not be easily forgotten. From your work I can tell you are religious. I'm not a religious person ...

Good day I am in love with your story, I like the narration but I feel it could have been more personal (the narration). You should show and not tell ...

Lovely just lovely, i love the poem. It's not my taste but I love the themes and the complexity gotten from the simple words like walking fast. The beginning seemed ...

Hello, I don't mean to downplay what you are going through, I also I'm not demeaning your poem. This is not a poem, I can't rate it as a narrative ...

A nicely written poem, I like the expressions used but I hate the way the poem lacked direction and I also hated the way it seemed propaganda. I am not ...

I can empathise with the loss depicted in this poem, I understand what it means to have someone by your side and all of a sudden the person disappears. The ...

Magnifico Simply magnificent. I love the world building and the description of the street. I also liked the way you wrote about the extras but I would have liked for ...

The poem is lovely, it talks about how dieting in our generation has gone awry. Companies market good health with carcinogenic materials. They try to make a quick buck on ...

Whoever this poem is talking about should feel elated. The writer is so attracted and smothered about the person that he compares love to a flame. A flame is a ...

This is very deep and talks about how frustrating life can be. It also talks about our existence what's the use of it all, What's the reason for us living, ...

This is not a poem, this is laziness at it's peak. The fact that other reviewers are celebrating this baffles me. I understand art is subjective but this sorry to ...

God another hot one. This is ultra good I thought I'll read something mediocre but this impressed me. The build-up was astounding and truly impressive. It is narrative poetry at ...

I am loving this site more and more so many talented writers. Most people may find the repetition annoying but I find it good. The writer is questioning every core ...

I loved the narration. You also used a figure of speech called euphemism, which entails given inanimate objects lively characteristics in the first paragraph. The ending of the first paragraph ...