Shriek

Awh. I can relate to the narrator's feelings so well in this (except for the fact that my ending wasn't as fortunate). I liked it a lot. You definately get ...

It seems uncanny that just as I've finished writing a research paper on "A Streetcar Named Desire" and Blanche DuBois, I stumble across this. According to my paper, you've done ...

I liked this! I usually don't read too much fantasy stuff (it confuses and bores me) but this was a very good peice. Solid writing and grammar, an interesting plotline. ...

I really liked this. It was short and sweet, but it really struck me. Though Lottie didn't give much more than a brief description of her life, it felt as ...

Ahaha, that made me laugh so hard. I don't know if it was meant to be a satire on all those emo songs such as "Slash My Wrists with Your ...

-Takes breath in- My thoughts are: 1) This piece is VERY well written in the descriptive writing sense. You certainly know how to use your adjectives powerfully--a little too powerfully ...

The end was overdone/melodramatic, yo. Or, something. Agreed. Although, I suppose it was fitting because of the way you characterized them as a sort a beast. Great mental image. Other ...

Oooh, cliffhanger. The style of this, to reiterate, is definately original and creative. Slight nitpick: I didn't like that you left off periods at the end of someone speaking. I ...

Oooh. I really liked this. I didn't think any of the imagery was excessive. Even the smallest detail can change the outcome of the picture as a whole. I loved ...

Ah, I liked this. The third stanza was a favorite here, especially these lines: "I let our sadness become written down, pressed to the other side of pages, where someone ...

Hm. There isn't much to be said that Brad hasn't already touched upon. I liked most of the descriptive words you used, although you were a tad redundant at times, ...

I liked this very much. To reiterate what someone before me said, I enjoyed the way you used "Any other Thursday" to tie different thoughts together. I especially liked this ...

I liked that. It was well written, and aside from a few spelling errors and missing apostrophes, gramatically correct. You have just enough description and dialogue, neither overpowering the other. ...

Eep. I'm not a fan of this title at all--not just because I'm from Ohio and cannot stand the band Hawthorne Heights. I dislike the title because I've seen it ...

Okay. Despite the spelling and grammatical errors (and there were quite a few of them), I liked this. The defiant, fed-up-with-life attitude of the speaker really came out strong with ...