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Shiksha

Shiksha

  • Poetry » Politics, Politics Re: something to talk about

    hi i am indian so i quite understand how you felt while writing this piece. i really liked the way you criticized the politicians and their ways. By saying every ...

    Jun 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Romantic Re: My Angel

    that was really good. i liked the way you say that no matter what you love this person and she will always be your angel. though what i felt was ...

    Jun 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Sad Thing

    hey i really liked this short poem of yours. it depicted the cruelty of humans very effectively. also, it described the pain effectively. although i liked the way you expressed ...

    Jun 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Our love

    AWW!!!! this is so darn cute!!! and you definitely love your girlfriend!! it was not actually a poem but yeah very cute for a dedication. even without a rhyme it ...

    Jun 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Goodbye Forever

    hey this one is REALLY nice!! i really liked it a lot!! it just shows how one is so depressed of life that he/she can't live anymore. but also that ...

    Jun 7, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative Re: Acne

    a very smart attempt! the poem is pretty short but it is the shortness that makes it so easy to read. i think you used the word 'plague' a lot ...

    Jun 7, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Going Crazy: A Beginner's Guide

    pretty cute and it aptly describes your state of mind. it is generally very difficult to pen down how one exactly feels. but you did a great job!! and then ...

    Jun 7, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Fantasy Re: Once I wished that I never rhyme...

    haha! that's funny and smart! very cute also. you made it sound NOT A BIG DEAL and carried on casually. so the poem was very nice to read. sounded very ...

    Jun 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Reality's Melodrama

    awwww....now that's what i really like because of two reasons- 1. i KNOW how the one sided love feels 2. the poem was just so real!! seriously i loved it! ...

    Jun 6, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: Amusement

    wow!! that was pretty good!!! you conveyed an excellent message without even saying it!! the boy and his dreams were narrated by you in the least characters that you could ...

    Jun 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Forbidden Love

    hey it was really nice...and seemed direct from the heart. but i felt it could be little more metaphorical. i mean you did use a lot of things to convey ...

    Jun 6, 2013


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