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Re: something to talk about
hi i am indian so i quite understand how you felt while writing this piece. i really liked the way you criticized the politicians and their ways. By saying every ...
Jun 26, 2013 -
Re: My Angel
that was really good. i liked the way you say that no matter what you love this person and she will always be your angel. though what i felt was ...
Jun 26, 2013 -
Re: Sad Thing
hey i really liked this short poem of yours. it depicted the cruelty of humans very effectively. also, it described the pain effectively. although i liked the way you expressed ...
Jun 26, 2013 -
Re: Our love
AWW!!!! this is so darn cute!!! and you definitely love your girlfriend!! it was not actually a poem but yeah very cute for a dedication. even without a rhyme it ...
Jun 26, 2013 -
Re: Goodbye Forever
hey this one is REALLY nice!! i really liked it a lot!! it just shows how one is so depressed of life that he/she can't live anymore. but also that ...
Jun 7, 2013 -
Re: Acne
a very smart attempt! the poem is pretty short but it is the shortness that makes it so easy to read. i think you used the word 'plague' a lot ...
Jun 7, 2013 -
Re: Going Crazy: A Beginner's Guide
pretty cute and it aptly describes your state of mind. it is generally very difficult to pen down how one exactly feels. but you did a great job!! and then ...
Jun 7, 2013 -
Re: Once I wished that I never rhyme...
haha! that's funny and smart! very cute also. you made it sound NOT A BIG DEAL and carried on casually. so the poem was very nice to read. sounded very ...
Jun 6, 2013 -
Re: Reality's Melodrama
awwww....now that's what i really like because of two reasons- 1. i KNOW how the one sided love feels 2. the poem was just so real!! seriously i loved it! ...
Jun 6, 2013 -
Re: Amusement
wow!! that was pretty good!!! you conveyed an excellent message without even saying it!! the boy and his dreams were narrated by you in the least characters that you could ...
Jun 6, 2013 -
Re: Forbidden Love
hey it was really nice...and seemed direct from the heart. but i felt it could be little more metaphorical. i mean you did use a lot of things to convey ...
Jun 6, 2013
