Shearwater

Hi! Pink here, as requested. Let's get started, shall we? “Are you sure you’ll be alright on your own? Memphis won’t be happy if I do, but I could stay ...

Hey young gun! Pink here, as requested. So I'm going to start off by just pointing a few things out. I haven't read the previous reviews for this, so I'm ...

Yo, it's Pink. I didn't read the review before this so sorry if some things are stated twice. Alright let's get started. Nitpicks The already cold wind picked up and ...

Hi Tanya, it's me, Pink! Let's review! “Yes, that one.” Morgana answered. comma after one. “Maybe because,” Tristan cut in, “I was abandoned by my parents as an infant and ...

Hi, Pink here! Just dropping by to give you a star. :) This is pretty good, I like it a lot. I love the meaning, I like the deep message ...

Hey Foxfire, I'm Pink. I'll be reviewing this for you today. Nitpicks “It’s beautiful, isn’t it?” Angel said as she lay beside me on the grass. I think it sounds ...

Hi MissyLil, welcome to YWS I'm Pink and I'll be reviewing this piece for you today. Nitpicks Fact, a myriel and a human should never become friends, if they don’t ...

Hey Classy, it's Pink! Okay so I don't really have any nitpicks on this one, besides what I posted before on your previous chapter. This is really good! :) It ...

Hey Classy, Pink here! :D “You look beautiful.” So do you, I thought, but my lips wouldn’t allow it to escape. One reason was that I hated him and the ...

Hey Classy, I'm here to review! *epic pose* So let's get started... Suggestions(because I don't consider these nitpicks) He realized as soon as he spoke that his words were slurred, ...

Hi Deadends! I'm Pink, here to do a review for your first piece! :D First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here as much as the ...

Hi tempted! (I can call you that right?) This is Pink, I'll be reviewing this piece for you today. But first, Welcome to YWS! I see you're new and I ...

Hi Ginger (don't mind if I call you that?) It's Pink. Just dropping by to do a quick review for you. First of all, welcome to YWS, hope you like ...

Hey Tanya, it's me. I shall review for you since, you've done so many reviews for me :wink: Nitpicks She was in her bedroom, in bed with her pajama on. ...

Hey Leeanna, Pink here, as requested. :D Nitpicks Two broad-shouldered, disfigured men stomped through an old log cabin. It was fairly large, well-furnished too. I think it'd be best if ...