Pandora ran fast down the sidewalk. Her feet slipped on the slushy ground as cool air whipped around her face. Laughter from behind caused her to push her legs even harder, and her breath started coming faster. Making a sharp turn, Pandora crossed the street, but before she could get across, she slipped and fell hard on ice. She lifted her head and felt something trickle off her lip. She spit and looked down and saw blood. Her black her curled around her face. She pushed her self up quickly barely keeping a hold of her shoulder bag. As she darted over to the next sidewalk, she jumped over the bushes through the yard and under the branches of low trees. Pandora ran through the dead limbs of the trees. She heard the footsteps behind her still. Why are they doing this? Why me? She begged for answers in her head. Pandora heard a river up ahead and had only one thought. She dropped her bag and ran faster than her legs could handle. She looked at the raging river, the water splashing around as if grabbing for something in the air. She inhaled deeply and heavily. Closing her eyes she ran toward the rapid water and she leaped into the cold icy waves. As the water rushed over her head that feeling came again. The warmth of her anger, adrenaline. That laugh rang in her head again. The feeling of that warm blood running over her hands, the feeling of the blade slicing through there skin. She didn't mean to. She gasped, her head coming out of the water away from the horrible memories. Pandora looked around trying to see past her hair. The water got louder and the current got stronger. Kicking hard and flailing her arms she tried to swim, but before she could get away from anything the water flung her over the edge. She flailed miserably as if wanting to get away but not wanting to. But before her mind was set her body hit the hard stones below her and everything went blank in her mind.
"Why?" someone whispered behind her with a hoarse voice. She turned to see her sister pale as snow. "Why did you kill me?" She screamed. Pandora's eyes started to water.
"Yes sweetie," her mom spoke calmly, her body looked limp. "Why?"
"You know I didn't do it on purpose!" Pandora screamed. "You knew I had problems with what you were doing to me!" Pandora kept screaming. "Why did you put me in therapy? I didn't need it. All I wanted was someone to care. Unlike you!" She couldn't stop screaming. "You made it happen! This is your fault. Why was I born? You made me!"
"Maybe we didn't want to!" Her father screamed. Their dead eyes pierced her but didn't seem bother her. "You were a mistake!" That word ripped at her, only because she knew it was true. Her parents told her that constantly. Tears of fear, tears of anger, tears of hate, and tears of pain trickled off her face. She fell to her knees as her family kept yelling.
"I didn't mean to..." she murmured through the tears. "I didn't mean to!" she screamed. The scream echoed through her head as she woke up. "I didn't mean to..." She mumbled. She heard crackling, as if fire. She looked over to see a small flame. In a fireplace. She was in a house, a very nice one. She was laid on the floor near the fireplace.
"Pandora darling" A mans voice came from across the room. "You're awake..."
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I think this is how you do reviews........
I think that it was a very nice story and it
keeps you thinking long after you have finished
reading it! There was only one problem with it
and it was that on one of the sentances you wrote
'cut there skin'. That doesn't really make any sense.
Apart from that it was great!
Keep writing!
From Jess
Wow I'm learning how to proofread in school and yet I still can't find mistakes. Well thanks a lot I really would not be able to find those myself, short attention spans don't help much either. Well once again thanks for the review/critique ~_^

~GingerSauR~
Hi Ginger (don't mind if I call you that?)
It's Pink. Just dropping by to do a quick review for you.
First of all, welcome to YWS, hope you like the place as much as the rest of us.
*oh, I just realized you signature, Owl City rocks!
Vanilla Twilight is like, my favorite song.
Now onto the review!
okay, so she slipped and then? A bit confusing, try telling us she got up or she 'almost slipped' but continued running.
I think you mean : her black hair curled around her face
her anger and adrenaline.
their skin? her skin?
there is small repetition of 'got' try became for one of them.
Sorry, I'm just a tad bit confused with this line. Did she want to get away but at the same time, she she want to stay in?
comma after set.
exclamation mark after me. "...kill me!" she screamed.
Remember the exclamation mark is stronger than the question mark so if there's a question that being 'yelled/shouted/screamed' an exclamation mark should be used.
seem to bother her?
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Alright, I just nitpicked on a few thing because I can't exactly review this piece fully since I don't understand what's going on here. I think you should break the first paragraph up so it's easier to read. A few of your sentences were a bit awkward to read and the flow needs a little more work. I'm not sure what to say about the storyline yet, maybe later on.
Sorry if I sounded harsh, Pm me if you have any questions (about anything)I'll be happy to help!
Well that's all, keep writing!
~Pink