Shearwater

Hi there! Pink here, stopping by for a review. Shall we get started? As the school bell rings, signaling that it’s time to go home, I pack up my things ...

Hey there Ziggie, Pink here! I know what you mean by new to poetry, I'm in the same situation. Now, be warned, I don't know much about poetry and I'm ...

Hey Ofir! (I keep wanting to spell your name as 'Ofire' lol) Thanks for pming this to me about this! Now, I do have just a few nitpicks that I'd ...

Hiya, Kit! Pink here :) Well, we're practically on the same boat here. I don't write poetry much either... Well, I agree with blackrose, for someone who doesn't write poetry, ...

Hiya Singdawg, Pink here :) So, I really liked this poem. There were some nice rhymes and the flow was nice. But I do think there were some parts that ...

First of all, welcome to YWS, Aiden! I'm Pink and I'll be reviewing this piece for you today. So, without further due, shall we get started? To bad, you have ...

Hello, Pink here :) A few nitpicks before we get started. I don’t always believe them, I can’t help but think that my real parents are out there somewhere, I'm ...

You wrote something else? Awesomeeee! Anyways, as your loyal sidekick (not exactly) I'm here as reviewer! So, shall we begin? Whoa, after I wrote that, I accidentally clicked something and ...

Hey Tanya! Thanks for the Pm, I'll be happy to review for you! Okay, so I had a review going but then I accidentally deleted it and ugh, I'm so ...

Hey, Scrowl (love the name) Pink here! First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you have fun here :) Alright, on to the review. Nitpicks skin and like an ...

Hi there! Okay, I don't normally review poems, so I'm sorry if this review isn't helpful. >.< I have to say, I thought your poem was very deep and full ...

Hi Jojo, Pink here! :) Nitpicks All the misinterpretation s and bad memories swirled about their minds like a swarm of angry bees. but here they were again. Running. >I ...

Hi Shubs! I saw you posted something and I giggled and was like "must review" :) Okay, so anyways, here I go. Character is a diamond which scratches all other ...

*claps* I love this! And to answer Razi's questions. This is how you would make a 'W', but you'd need two people. Unless there's a way to do it by ...

Hi there, Pink here! Dropping by for a quick review. So I didn't read this before it was edited so I'm sure how much you improved but there wasn't much ...