Shearwater

Bonjour, Skins! C'est moi, Pink ;) Allez! His eyes simply remained shut. The air around me was so cold, it felt as though it was burning my skin. Cold air ...

Hey Carly! Pink here :) So, I've noticed that you're still making some mistakes regarding punctuation. I meant to mention it before and I think I did in one of ...

Hey Carlito! I've been wanting to review the rest of this but kept pushing it back, sorry. But I was thinking for something to review and just remembered that I ...

Hey Crafty, Pink here! First of all, this is totally awesome. I love how you used mother nature's voice to write a letter to humans. It's funny and yet you ...

Hi Hannah, I'm here to review the next part ;) but can't remember where she put anything, because after James left it was sort of a red, embarrassed blur, spreading ...

Hey Skins! Back for another review, mwahaha. Alrighty... She was smirking as she constantly chewed on the piece of gum that was in her mouth. I would loose the word ...

Hi Hannah! Pink here! Nitpicks When she pulls the handle on the door of her SUV, Ruth can feel the pop and slide of the gears as they free the ...

Hey Skins! Back for another review. Honestly, I'm getting tired of running a nitpicking section so I'm going to skip that part, I hope you don't mind ;) But, even ...

Hey Whisper! Thanks for the pm, I'm here to review! Nitpicks “I don’t know…” he ultimately and blankly answered in a low voice. I think this is a bit overdone. ...

Hey pal! Pink here :) So I'm super angry right now, I just did my review and then accidentally deleted half of it and I'm seriously too lazy to go ...

Hey Pal, Pink here. I promised a review today and here I am :D Alright, so I don't have much nitpicks for this. Your writing has definitely improved from the ...

Hey-yo, Skins :) Sorry I'm falling behind >.< But anyways, on to the review! *Charges* “Jesus Christ...” Oliver’s annoying voice moaned, interrupting Richard and I's moment. I think this sounds ...

Hey, Pen, Pink here. I already told you that I really liked this, but I wouldn't feel right if I didn't at least comment/reviewed this. So, what I really liked ...

Yo, Skinsy, Pink here ;) So, I'm back for another chapter! Whoot, whoot! “There we go,” She smiled, tapping the suitcase before looking back up at me. “so you like ...

Hey, Pal, thanks for telling me it was up :) Now, on to the review :) Entering the hall, I saw everyone was there. Coach saw me coming in and ...