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Will look to it. Thanks.

Pleasure.. and no rhyme is fine..

It's okay.. and I have a thing for repetition anyways.. half my marks are cut in the exams because of this..

Thanks.. really appreciate it... :)

Thanks.. Actually I have thing for selecting the most apt title.. Glad you liked it.. :)

Thanks for the suggestions.. I'll be sure to look into them..

Thank you anngelalu.. I'll be sure to take those points into consideration...

Thanks:)

Thanks for the great review..:)

Wowww.. I love this one.. it's a bit short in length but that just adds to the beauty of this piece.. It shouts out joy and happiness.. It has rhythm, ...

This is a really good poem, Braiden. It totally justifies it's genre of dramatic mystery or suspense. But I personally feel that your sentences could have been a bit long ...