Shalmz

hi writer, nice write... i like the name nobody. and the horrors introduced were cool too. this para- ""Suit yourself, kid, it's always nice to meet a stranger. But fair ...

hi writer, i come from the same cultural background. so i understand your writing. great work. it rhymed a bit along the lines of twilight at the start. the para- ...

hi writer, you have warned of the dangers of wild. the poem is filled with adrenaline. i loved the lines- " razor sharp claws spots rippling across it's fur the ...

hi writer, its a great story. kept me captivated. i loved lucia's transition from pre marriage to post marriage. the darkness already destroying her and making her do impossible tasks. ...

hi writer, great piece. yes, i got the errors are intentional . and they are put in precise locations. mt congratulations on writing it. the idea was fresh and written ...

hi writer, loved it, love it.... throughout the poem you kept me enthralled as to what comes nest. amazing piece. i would love to her more on the underworld gods ...

hi writer, honestly, you poem gave me some mixed reading while reading it. the first line starts clearly enough- 'Don't hold on [beat.] to me. (2x) I don't need you, ...

hi writer, i for one will definitely give you superpowers after reading this. its cool and totally right. and even i wish - "i would make all normal people cower, ...

well done. you have a clear idea what you wish to convey and go about it. the sentiments of the American to this would be similar to yours. the social ...

Beautiful, just Beautiful.... Each stanza begins with different opening and then connects with the main idea of your poem. for the first " Standing on the corner of giving up ...

hi, i love the indentations made to emphasize on the words. they have a great effect. " p a r t ." and the start to the poem "blank stares"; ...

first of all, it has a great flow. for this "My hands are shaking, My heart is breaking, and I didn't know it'd end this way. I'm sick of just ...