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Re: VALOR - Chapter 3 - You Call This A Gym?
*gasp* thank you! Yes, I keep having that problem of taking the reader through many places without letting them breathe. Im still fixing that and will continue to improve on ...
Apr 28, 2020 -
Re: VALOR - Chapter 2 - First Class and First Impressions
Thank you for explaining the paragraphed dialogue to me! I didn't know it works like that! I'm glad the info dump didn't feel like an info dump! Yvie will be ...
Apr 28, 2020 -
Re: VALOR - Chapter 2 - First Class and First Impressions
Omg I'm so sorry for the late reply! Yes, there's still a lot of work to be done and I'm slowly writing while keeping every advice in mind! Those ARE ...
Apr 28, 2020 -
Re: VALOR - Chapter 2 - First Class and First Impressions
Omg I'm so sorry for the late reply! Yes, there's still a lot of work to be done and I'm slowly writing while keeping every advice in mind! Those ARE ...
Apr 28, 2020 -
Re: VALOR - Chapter 4 - A Tale on the Front Lines
Hoi!! Thank you for the review! And I'm super happy you met my Vitia! She was the girl in the prologue and she's my Tanya! HAHAHAHAHA (she's 23 years old ...
Apr 27, 2020 -
Re: VALOR - Chapter 4 - A Tale on the Front Lines
Oh gosh, now that you mention it... Mechanical enemy would make it sound like a robot or a mech! Thank you for pointing that out! I'm planning on not editing ...
Apr 27, 2020 -
Re: VALOR - Chapter 4 - A Tale on the Front Lines
Oh gosh, now that you mention it... Mechanical enemy would make it sound like a robot or a mech! Thank you for pointing that out! I'm planning on not editing ...
Apr 27, 2020 -
Re: VALOR - Chapter 3 - You Call This A Gym?
Thank you for the review! Yes, thank you for pointing out the advice i always give but never seemed to follow myself! I'll do my best to improve on taking ...
Apr 27, 2020 -
Re: The Witch's Hut- Chapter One
Woah! Thank you for the fun and really dark fact! Dorcas Good? Sounds like dork and ass!
Apr 27, 2020 -
Re: Dust To Danger (When We Ruled The Waves Chapter 1)
Awwww yissss!!
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: This Hole You've Put Me In
I am glad you enjoyed the poem, Starlit! Thank you for the advice and yes, I do like grammared poetry so I'll take your advice to heart! I'll keep on ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: VALOR - Prologue - Hear How They Whistle
Omg I'm so sorry! I saw the other one first and just saw this now. Huhuhu! But yes, my story will be heavily based off of two animes: one is ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: VALOR - Chapter 1 - Highmark Academy
Hi! Yes I'm glad that you like the prologue! I'm planning on making it a bit more dark and grim like the prologue in some chapters in the future! As ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: VALOR - Chapter 3 - You Call This A Gym?
In regards to mountains and valleys... I'm afraid I'm a little above Isenna so I don't know how hard it is to have mountains HAHAHAHAHAHA! And thank you again!
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: VALOR - Chapter 3 - You Call This A Gym?
I SPAT OUT MY ASPIRIN WHEN I READ THAT COACH WILL HAUNT YOUR DREAMS! I'm very sorry for scaring you with coach and I'm glad you're enjoying the story and ...
Apr 26, 2020