ShakespeareWallah

to start it off, congrats! for the top five. honestly, the moment i started reading your poem and got on to finish the first two lines which are : "it's ...

a really good poem! beautifully worded stanzas and a great deal of imagery. i liked specially the way how you started it in a somewhat imperative way. the verses were ...

first thought after reading : is it a nursery rhyme? second thought after reading: is it one of those grammar learning techniques for adolescents for example: cat purrs, cow moos, ...

i think i have to agree with ROD here. it doesn't really look like a short story but rather a summary or a blurb. i supposed the plot, which you ...

i have to say: cool story. the prose really good and well put. everything in the story seemed right in order and had a lot of sensuality in it. although ...

great job man. the prose was was really poignant and vibrant and it really should the feelings of a distressed person who finds himself in a lost place. really well ...

"When you touch me it feels like rain running down my spine like a thunderstorm in mid-July" these lines seemed quite sensual to me. very neat word choice bound in ...

there is one Ya book that impressed me a lot....That's the Artemis Fowl series.... I had just finished reading the world's most rubbish book then ( the twilight saga) and ...

great story man...specially the ending. actually showed some part of the discrimination that still happens around the world...and I really liked the part when you mentioned marriage really looked a ...

okay, first of all....stop giving all that information one after another. everything was happening a little too fast. So I think you ought to describe it a little more, throw ...

to me personally grammars don't mean a big thing...the plot does. and your one was really good.......though some of it didn't make sense to me....you mentioned the apartment complex as ...

No offense, but the most awesome thing in this story is not the plot but rather the way you say it... there might be a lot of grammatical mistakes but ...

hey.....first of all,the plot was really sweet. liked it.and the title of your story also fits well because I, at some parts of the story, did felt that it was ...

Dude, the story's awesome, and it's really short. but the question is how did Rory died? the protagonist at the end of the story saw a boy and she thought ...