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Re: Me and My Poems
I totally agree with Felistia, and I'd appreciate if you'd like edit it and stuff, it would be so much more better, I'm sure. This is about writing and its ...
Aug 7, 2016 -
Re: Friend
This is just like something I would love to say about my closest group of friends, I'm actually going to quote this and send it them, because of how perfect ...
Aug 7, 2016 -
Re: Poem of Your Eyes
What can i say? But AMAZING, this is different, unique, new and lovely. It's so short but portrays all the feelings of love. I like the fact that at the ...
Aug 7, 2016 -
Re: Prayers of You
Okay, Prayer is a wonderful thing to do with my time, I like how you say you thank him for these things. Normally these are the seemingly little things, bit ...
Aug 7, 2016 -
Re: emo girl
Your poem could use a bit of work, bit the idea of it is fantastic. This is what most people go through and it's so easy to relate with this. ...
Jul 23, 2016 -
Re: The War Against Humanity.
Hey its ShaeSnow here for a review!!! So, i like the thing you did with does lines at the edge, they could be read as subtitles or the beginning of ...
Jul 3, 2016 -
Re: Empty
I support her on not running from monsters, even if you go somewhere there is probably a different type of crisis there too. God bless those who risk their lives ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Chocolate
Lovely poem, I like the title and the beginning. It's concise, straight to the point and then a little bit into the poem it gets deep showing anoyher side to ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: the names of heartache
This Is an amazing piece of literature... The Way the narrator twist words and show a new way to an old idea is great, indeed I believe heartache can be ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: But Never Forget
First and foremost, I love it. The style, the words, the fact that it talks to one and all. Like anybody and everybody. Dethrone shouldn't have an s in the ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Night Fishing
It's nice how at first it's veiled and the title doesn't let on so much about it. Then you read and it's like oh, oh oooh. It was fun reading ...
Jun 24, 2016
