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Re: Guild Of Thieves
Hey Ion! Shady here with your review, as requested. c: The sombre tones of the Great Bell announced the passing of the twelfth hour , and (The passing of the ...
Jun 26, 2013 -
Re: The Fading - Chapter One
Hey Unds! Shady here to review Chapter Three and Four, as requested. Sorry it took a bit. I got sick. >.> I suggest you post any subsequent chapters separately. It'll ...
Jun 19, 2013 -
Re: The Fading - Chapter One
Hey Unds! Shady here with your review, as promised. I tend to start my reviews with specific points, whether they be complaints or compliments, and wrap them up with a ...
Jun 13, 2013 -
Re: Yearning to be Free
Hey Rian! I'm sorry that this was so long in the coming. This month has been uber crazy for me. But, I'm here at last with your review~ Now when ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: The Voice for the Voiceless
Hey Rian! Sorry this review is so late, but I'm finally here, as requested. c: You've submitted a quality piece, as usual. Your message is clear ( I even understood ...
Apr 28, 2013 -
Re: Techno-Heads - Chapter 2
Hey Xiira! Shady here with review number two! :D (Sorry it took me so bloody long. >.>) "Stop fighting, you idiots!" a girl's voice yelled from the radio. "Oh, wait, ...
Jun 13, 2013 -
Re: Techno-Heads - Chapter 1
Hey Xiira! Shady here with a review, as requested. :) Nit picks first... Watch you r backs Living in an underground bunker that her father a radio spy had left ...
Apr 16, 2013 -
Re: Devil's Trap (chapter 4)
Hey Ainhe! Shady here with a review! :) I'm happy when I notice how many of them are stopped by their mother ' s. ~ Not possessive. It's Archer Rival. ...
Apr 7, 2013 -
Re: Devil's Trap (chapter 3)
Hey Ainhe! Shady here to review. I'm excited to read this next chapter! :) But if she proves to be useless, then I am certain her fate will not be ...
Apr 5, 2013 -
Re: Devil's Trap (chapter 2)
Hey Ainhe! Shady here with a review for you this fine afternoon. :) Since you write like I do, and I'm fairly certain I won't be able to find any ...
Apr 2, 2013 -
Re: Me: The Beginning
Hey Amon! Shady here with a review, as requested. :D We ditched school, went to church, then to the library, and trust me, it sounds a lot better than it ...
Apr 2, 2013 -
Re: Scenes in Walmart
Hey Inkwell! Shady here with a short review for you this fine evening! :D Firstly...bahahaha I liked this. A lot. It made me smile. I particularly liked: as a commander ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: I Never Knew
Hey Andge! Fellow Green Beret! Your friendly co-captain sliding in with a review for you mere minutes before Review Day ends. ;) Okay! Wow. I liked this. Brief, concise, to ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: For YWS Competition {Also give it a TITLE}
Yo Animal! Shady here with a review for your poem this fine evening! :D Before writing, I have to open all the knots, Without that, I can't give it shots. ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: Once I Went to England...
Hey Malla! Shady here with a short review for your poem this fine evening. :D I really liked your first stanza. It was amusing. However, your poem degenerated into a ...
Mar 31, 2013
