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Heyo Del, Shady here with a review for you. I'm going to pick up on the second half, since I already reviewed the first of this ;) "Kaydence, with this ...

Hey Ox, Shady here with a review for you, as promised. I will be trying to focus this review on clunkiness and seeing if I can offer some suggestions about ...

Heya ink, Shady back with another review! You already know I'm out of creativity, so let's just get started, shall we? "Oh no," Yuni whispered, saying aloud what Asha was ...

Hey ink, Shady back with another review! I'm running out of ways to open these reviews, so I'm going to err on the side of fatalism and simply accept the ...

Hey Del! I am completely and inexcusably late for this review. I'm so sorry about that >.< Especially since this chapter is so short too, gosh, I'm a failure. So ...

BiscBiscBisc, I'm baaack! Nice job on the A/N... made it feel like you were addressing me as your reader directly ;) Alright, joking aside, let's get started on this review... ...

HAI! I'M BACK! And I'm super excited to read your next bit. So let's get started... Hmm... not sure I'm loving the opening. Don't get me wrong -- it's a ...

Heyo Bisc, Shady back again to see what in the world these animals are going to be up to in this chapter ;) Let's get started! Satisfied that all the ...

Heyo Bisc, I saw your post asking for someone to adopt this novel... and I really can't guarantee that I'll have time to really commit to following this as a ...

Hey inktopus, Shady back again. It's been a while, eh? I skimmed the previous chapter and am going to see if I can just jump straight back in, but I ...

Hey inktopus, Shady back again. You know the routine so I won't waste time on a lengthy explanation here -- though I will mention a little aside. You posted this ...

Hey inktopus, You already know what I'm going to say in terms of an introduction, so let's just skip that altogether, shall we? Okay. So getting started... The long days ...

Hey inktopus, Shady back with another review! Look at me actually being productive, eh? ;) Let's get started... The streets paved with uneven cobblestone thudded beneath Asha’s boots. Okay, I'm ...

Hey inktopus, Shady back again for another review on this lovely novel you have posted. Let's get started... Panting, Asha looked up at the night sky, Why is she panting? ...

Hey Spilledink, Shady here with a review for your excerpt! My style tends to be making general comments as I read, then giving an overview of my thoughts about your ...