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"you really do have the diet of a 7 year old with a liquor license" ~ Atticus

  • Article / Essay » Politics, Realistic Re: I hate liberals

    Hi Kalsie, I hope you're well! Shady here to review your short essay today! I'll be honest with you, I'm having a bit of trouble picking out the structure of ...

    Nov 24, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: maybe I'm a fish that needs to learn to fly.

    Whatcha! I saw the word FISH and was drawn here, as the resident fish nerd ;) not all stars belong in the sky. I really like this opening line! But ...

    Nov 8, 2020
  • Article / Essay » Politics, Other Re: YWS Polling Survey Results

    Heya Vil, I remember taking your survey, so I am actually really interested to see these results and I'm glad you wrote this up! I agree with some of the ...

    Oct 23, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 13)

    BOOO, no one cares about Isa anymore, there's a DRAGON back at the Citadel. :P ;) There was a river running parallel to the road that had been there for ...

    Oct 1, 2020
  • Art » Dramatic, Realistic Re: A Phone Call- II

    Heya Dreamy, Shady here with a review for the second part of your story! I'm super excited to see where you take this! But the mornings, hot bright mornings remove ...

    Oct 1, 2020
  • Art » Dramatic, Realistic Re: A Phone Call - I

    Heya Dreamy, Shady here with a quick review for you to finish out RevMo! Let's get started... The first thing that stood out to me is how long some of ...

    Oct 1, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 12.2)

    SCRIBS - DRAGON CHAPTER?! The shells were dark, mottled brown, with strange flecks of colour that shimmered at different angles. What kind of color? He's not really touching the eggs, ...

    Sep 30, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 12.1)

    Scribs! Five to go! Let's do thissss! It wasn’t that Cassius, or the others for that matter, had never heard the horror stories of the Wilderlands. But the forest outside ...

    Sep 30, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 11)

    Scribberoni! Look, if I can get six more reviews done in the next like 22 hours, I get a gold badge. I'm gonna get that badge, right? RIGHT? Here's to ...

    Sep 30, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Hero's Brother (20.2)

    Scribs! You know the drill... I am sorry to be randomly jumping into this novel (I know I've reviewed other random parts of this novel? But not this one?), I ...

    Sep 30, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: America Gone - Chapter Seventeen

    Heya Vil, I haven't read the previous installments of this book, but I saw this hanging around in the Green Room, so in the spirit of RevMo and the Checklist ...

    Sep 30, 2020
  • Poetry » Politics, Humor Re: informational dissonance within an entertainment phenomenon

    Omni! I fully encouraged this trend of poetry, and now I feel bad about that since they're all in the Green Room, so here I am with your review. HAPPY ...

    Sep 30, 2020
  • Poetry » Politics, Humor Re: no cookies until you finish your vegetables

    Veersies! I feel GUILT that I encouraged this behavior and now we've got all these haikus in the Green Room so here I be to try to review this for ...

    Sep 30, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Forgotten Ch. 3

    Omni! Excited to read this next bit of your novel! Let's get started... The nights of the mountain were harsh, but it was stark relief from the pain of his ...

    Sep 28, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 10)

    HEY WE ARE TO A CHAPTER I CAN USE FOR MY CHECKLIST LET'S GOOOO While Mishal certainly didn’t engage in the fanciful, unrealistic stories with no inherent value that Cassius ...

    Sep 26, 2020


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