Shady

Heya again raindrops, Shady back for your last requested review! Thanks again for requesting :D And feel free to keep me updated as you post new installments of this story ...

Hey raindrops, Shady back for another requested-review! Let's get started... Red. In every birth that's the first color I recognize. Not a white light or an empty darkness. I see ...

Hey raindrops, Thanks so much for requesting reviews! I'm excited to read your story! Let's get started... Feeling the harsh wind on my tanned skin, the flying dust that enters ...

HELLO, IT IS I -- back again. Let's go. Before he could get any more concrete answers James was forced to eat, which he took as a personal offense, but ...

SOUND! HELLO, IT IS I -- the person who has no idea what's happened up to this point in the story -- here to review for you. Seriously, though, you're ...

Heya whatcha, Thanks so much for requesting a review! I'm sorry it took me so long to get to, but I am here now, and super excited to give you ...

Hi lilliana, Thanks so much for requesting a review! I'm sorry this took me a while to get to, but I'm here now! Looking forward to this c: your eyes ...

Wowzas Mage, this is good ! I of course was drawn to it by the title, with today being today and all. I almost didn't read it because of your ...

Mess! Sorry this took me a while to get to this, but I'm here now! She hammered the peg, grunting with effort as the foot-long stake pierced the sifting earth ...

Liminality! Thanks so much for such a thought-provoking poem :D The first read-through I was like "wut?" and figured I was missing something, as I am apt to do when ...

STORY! I really like your opening! It sets a nice tone for the story and I feel like I can really envision the setting really well already. The one suggestion ...

Heya yumi, Welcome to YWS! Shady here with a review for you. Let's get started... I'll be honest with you, I'm having a little bit of trouble uncovering your intent ...

Hi Ichoi, Thanks so much for requesting a review! I apologize that this took me a while to get to, but I'm here now, and I'm super excited to read ...

Hi Hkumar, I'm so sorry that this took me a while to get to, but I'm here now! And I appreciate the request! This is a nice poem! At first, ...

Hey FireEyes, WOW this is a powerful poem! It's so raw and it's so apparent how close to home this hits for you. I love the emotions throughout and the ...