Young Writers Society

I admit that I really enjoyed the concept of this. Unfortunately, it was a bit hard to read and I didn't really understand much. For instance, who is Olivia? Why ...

I really, really enjoyed this. The writing was a bit difficult to understand at times, though. I'm still not sure what these creature/people were or why your character had to ...

Hey there! ShadowPrincess here to leave a quick review. There were a few grammatical errors in this but they've already been touched on so I won't do it again. What ...

I really do like this but I feel like it's missing some sort of emotion. No matter how sad you are that someone leaves, there's always that little bit of ...

Hey there! Shadow here to review. I really, really loved this. But I also felt like there wasn't enough emotion in it. I would have loved to have felt a ...

Wow I just realized how truly long it has been since I have reviewed so I am going to give you the best one I have. First off I loved ...

Hey, Well, the first thing I have to say is that I really like this. You can tell that you put real effort into writing it. Being a survivor of ...

The first and foremost thing I have got to say about this is that it was amazing. I really liked how you waited until the last line to say what ...

Wow. This one was...amazing. It made me think of my best friend's suicide. You got the emotions down really good. I felt everything that you were trying to convey. All ...

I liked this one a lot. I think the only thing that bugged me was the fact that you misspelled despair. But, then again, I'm kinda OCD about spelling so ...

Wow. That is honestly all I can say right now. This was a really good poem. Actually, it sorta makes me want to write the poem that has been collecting ...

Wow this was really good. I could actually feel what the narrator of the poem was feeling and that's kinda hard to do with a poem as short as this. ...

Well, I can honestly say that this was really good. The only bad part was that when I read it it sounded kinda choppy. If you put it into stanzas ...

I can honestly say that I love this. This story was an utter masterpiece and I believe that you will someday (if you wish it) be one of the world's ...

WOW! This was amazing. Reading it almost made me cry, and I usually don't cry when reading something, so that's saying a lot. The voice of the narrator was really ...