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Re: Endgame
Hey! Thanks for reminding me to review this. Honestly, after reading this poem, I had to remind myself how to breathe. First of all, the format is wonderful. It is ...
Mar 25, 2016 -
Re: Chocolate
Hey there, Keepwriting! Caterpickle here to review this little poem. The length was nice and refreshing, because sometimes, I find this super long poems, where the write just reiterates their ...
Mar 14, 2016 -
Re: The Story of My Father
Hey there, ddialoverofr5! I'm Caterpickle, and I'm here to review your story. So, I'm pretty sure the first eleven lines you wrote were a mix of school requirements and minimal ...
Mar 14, 2016 -
Re: 滴答
Hey there Nek0y0uka1, Caterpickle here to review this short story. If I told you I wasn't confused at all, I would be lying. I thought that the story had good ...
Mar 11, 2016 -
Re: Psych
Hey, SkyeWalker, fellow Star Wars lover! I'm here to give a short review on your work! I thought that this was...different. It was fresh, new, and therefore, exciting. The beginning ...
Mar 10, 2016 -
Re: of empires and stomachaches
Caterpickle here to review. Wow, Autumns, this is amazing. I love this genre of poetry, about the rebellions developing, and the tyrannical dictators, because there are so many words and ...
Mar 9, 2016 -
Re: 2 Minutes - Part 2
Hey, CHRISSY321! Happy review day! I read the first part of this little trilogy, but I decided to put my review on the second part, mainly because I'd like to ...
Jan 31, 2016 -
Re: The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter One)
Hi, Skins! Caterpickle here to review on review day. I was pretty entertained by this chapter. It was a little typical and cliche, but interesting. I didn't expect Zack Maddox ...
Jan 31, 2016 -
Re: 12 Months Later
Wow, Cheaper, this is so amazing. I was awed at the format you chose, with the months, and the hanging indents, and whatnot. It made your poem flow very well. ...
Jan 26, 2016 -
Re: Episode -1: The Adventure Of Seven
Hello, Whatabook. I'm here to review your...episode. This was extremely confusing, and not very well formatted, to be quite honest. I know you may be trying to write it like ...
Jan 23, 2016 -
Re: Something of Value
Agh! Rishik, this was an...interesting little story, to say the most and to say the least. Caterpickle here to review it as best I can. I liked how you started ...
Jan 14, 2016 -
Re: By the age of
Hi there, throughtherabbithole! This was a really good poem, with a lot of meaning. While it was a little cliche, it was well written. I would suggest separating the ages ...
Jan 12, 2016 -
Re: Sleeper
Oooooh, maverymadams, I really hope you write a sequel or a follow-up short story to this one, I'm excited to see how this ends. If you have already written one ...
Jan 8, 2016 -
Re: perfect on the surface, broken at the seams
Hi Wolfe, here to try to review this poem. I say try because it's one of those poems that is so perfect, that nothing should be changed. I loved the ...
Jan 7, 2016 -
Re: they tell me that writing is a form of art founded on rules
Ohhh, my lord, Carina. You took my breath away and ripped out my heart. With this poem, you you filled me with energy and the desire to rebel against everyone ...
Jan 7, 2016
