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Break The Chains

  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Endgame

    Hey! Thanks for reminding me to review this. Honestly, after reading this poem, I had to remind myself how to breathe. First of all, the format is wonderful. It is ...

    Mar 25, 2016
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Chocolate

    Hey there, Keepwriting! Caterpickle here to review this little poem. The length was nice and refreshing, because sometimes, I find this super long poems, where the write just reiterates their ...

    Mar 14, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Story of My Father

    Hey there, ddialoverofr5! I'm Caterpickle, and I'm here to review your story. So, I'm pretty sure the first eleven lines you wrote were a mix of school requirements and minimal ...

    Mar 14, 2016
  • Short Story » Technology, Historical Fiction Re: 滴答

    Hey there Nek0y0uka1, Caterpickle here to review this short story. If I told you I wasn't confused at all, I would be lying. I thought that the story had good ...

    Mar 11, 2016
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Other Re: Psych

    Hey, SkyeWalker, fellow Star Wars lover! I'm here to give a short review on your work! I thought that this was...different. It was fresh, new, and therefore, exciting. The beginning ...

    Mar 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Politics, Humor Re: of empires and stomachaches

    Caterpickle here to review. Wow, Autumns, this is amazing. I love this genre of poetry, about the rebellions developing, and the tyrannical dictators, because there are so many words and ...

    Mar 9, 2016
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: 2 Minutes - Part 2

    Hey, CHRISSY321! Happy review day! I read the first part of this little trilogy, but I decided to put my review on the second part, mainly because I'd like to ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter One)

    Hi, Skins! Caterpickle here to review on review day. I was pretty entertained by this chapter. It was a little typical and cliche, but interesting. I didn't expect Zack Maddox ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: 12 Months Later

    Wow, Cheaper, this is so amazing. I was awed at the format you chose, with the months, and the hanging indents, and whatnot. It made your poem flow very well. ...

    Jan 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Science Fiction Re: Episode -1: The Adventure Of Seven

    Hello, Whatabook. I'm here to review your...episode. This was extremely confusing, and not very well formatted, to be quite honest. I know you may be trying to write it like ...

    Jan 23, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Something of Value

    Agh! Rishik, this was an...interesting little story, to say the most and to say the least. Caterpickle here to review it as best I can. I liked how you started ...

    Jan 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: By the age of

    Hi there, throughtherabbithole! This was a really good poem, with a lot of meaning. While it was a little cliche, it was well written. I would suggest separating the ages ...

    Jan 12, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sleeper

    Oooooh, maverymadams, I really hope you write a sequel or a follow-up short story to this one, I'm excited to see how this ends. If you have already written one ...

    Jan 8, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: perfect on the surface, broken at the seams

    Hi Wolfe, here to try to review this poem. I say try because it's one of those poems that is so perfect, that nothing should be changed. I loved the ...

    Jan 7, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: they tell me that writing is a form of art founded on rules

    Ohhh, my lord, Carina. You took my breath away and ripped out my heart. With this poem, you you filled me with energy and the desire to rebel against everyone ...

    Jan 7, 2016


The strongest people are not those who show their true strength in front of us but those who win battles we know nothing about.
— Unknown