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I enjoy reading pieces like this, where the true identity of the subject is revealed at the end. It always makes me reread the piece with the newfound knowledge of ...

I just have a couple grammatical nitpicks and some stylistic suggestions. As a child you were an empty shell, nothing could get you out of your bed to face the ...

Alright, here's the promised review. You mentioned wanting to turn this into a longer piece. Usually, in crime-mystery-robbery stories, at least most of it is told from the point of ...

A review, as promised. I thought this story was well written. You were able to carry out the theme all the way from the title to the very last line. ...

Hi MialyNire! Sevro here to review your new poem. First off, I like the title. It's intriguing, to say the least. When I was seven, I had things. Small, joyous ...

Hey AkeliaTaske! I don't think we've met before. I'm Sevro, and I'm here to review your work on review day! First off, wow. This is so long! Sometimes, when people ...

Hey, pendr. Sevro here on review day. I'll just jump right in. So, wow. First off, I never knew that this syndrome existed, so thank you for shedding some light ...

Hey, RoyalHighness. Sevro here on review day to try me best to help you out as much as I can. I stopped. I thought I’d heard something move outside the ...

Hey there, shatteredspring. Sevro here to review your poem. The fractured surface of gentle water Gently lapping to and fro Flowing around the hand of a child As she stares ...

Hi there, babydollblues. Sevro here to review your poem. They hang like gargoyles over my bed, And live in my lungs, Screaming for mama and things that never come. I ...

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Hey there, raindrop34. I liked the idea of this story; two royal brothers, one hateful and vengeful, and the other, ignorant, kind, and unaware of his brother's anger toward him. ...

Um. Ok. The amount of grammar errors is astonishing, and I don't even know how to comprehend it. Let's start with the title. It doesn't really make sense. I know ...

Hi, Glauke! Thanks for the PM, and introducing me to this masterpiece. Truly, it's incredible. From the second I read the title, I was intrigued. The first stanza is a ...

Huh. This was oddly deep, and a little inspiring. I feel like I can indirectly relate to the poem. Sometimes, it just seems like people only do things because someone ...