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Re: italics collection
Hi hi! This is such a pretty collection! I love poetry that all ties together somehow! :> The first poem is really interesting! I love the celestial imagery with the ...
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Re: Garnets on the Asteric Plane - Chapter 3
Hi hi! I'm so excited for this chapter! The last one was great! I remember it left off a little abruptly, so I'm happy to see what finally happened. It's ...
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Re: Garnets on the Asteric Plane - Chapter 2
Hi hi! I'm back... again! This is really starting to shape up now! We're really getting somewhere here! There's a lot of action going on here, with the paparazzi and ...
Aug 13, 2024 -
Re: Garnets on the Asteric Plane - Chapter 1
Hi hi! I have returned! I am excited to see how this story develops! :> In the prologue, I mentioned not knowing enough about the characters. This chapter adds a ...
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Re: Garnets on the Asteric Plane - Prologue
Hi hi! Omg I've been looking to jump into a novel for so long! I see that this already has a few early chapters, so I might see if I ...
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Re: attachment as superstition
Hi hi! This is so beautiful! I don't read a lot of poetry, but this made me gasp when I read it! There's something special about your style to me ...
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Re: If reviews were easy
Hi hi! This is so relatable! I'm new to the site, but I completely understand how you feel... reviewing is so fun, but it's so draining at the same time! ...
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Re: Edge of Humanity
Hi hi! I love science fiction so much! It's one of my favorite genres! It's like there's so many different paths to take, which means the story is always exciting! ...
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Re: Her Figure
Hi hi! This is so cool! I've never read a reverse poem before, but I'm glad I did now! I'm not a poet at all though... maybe I'm just inexperienced ...
Aug 8, 2024 -
Re: Taken pt 3
Hi hi! I'm going into this story completely blind lol, so sorry if I don't catch on to everything! I appreciate the little refresher though! That was very kind to ...
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Re: Socialism in the 19th and 20th centuries
Hi hi! I've taken a few classes where we talked about this! I'm not at all an expert, but I'd like to think I know what I'm talking about! But ...
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Re: i will bury you in time
Hi hi! This is so beautiful! It's so cathartic to write about parents. I feel emotions that I can't place when I read this. My father is a smoker as ...
Aug 6, 2024 -
Re: *******
Hi hi! This is so cool visually! It feels like a fairytale you'd read to kids, with the aesthetics and the cool art hahah! It's easy to overcrowd a page ...
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Re: i hate mirrors
Hi hi! Oh my goodness, this is beautiful! It's short and succinct, but it's just enough! Insecurity is a normal part of life, but it sucks... :/ I think that ...
Aug 4, 2024 -
Re: Rebellion of The Cows
Hi hi! This is so interesting! It feels very lively to me! It's giving me a coming-of-age ambiance because of the youthful dialogue. The dynamics between the boys are so ...
Aug 4, 2024
