SecreteJournalist

Maybe try using an reason for holding out her hand, but more descriptive words?

I will review this when I can!

It truly is.

Woah... I don't know if it's just a bug on my screen, but it shows my comment twice.

Well, a while ago, I had made a friend. Real pretty she was, and she was nice and funny. We shared a lot in common. But you know how people ...

Well, a while ago, I had made a friend. Real pretty she was, and she was nice and funny. We shared a lot in common. But you know how people ...

Not all poems need punctuation.

Nah, all I did was help with flow of the poem, the words were all you(:

Great job, Simon(:

*inserts a note to say "after lunch I will review" here*

I appreciate the review! I will edit it when I get the chance (The iPad isn't my preferred choice for posting things because it changes formatting). Thank you(:

I apologize for worrying you.... .-.

I will try and review this after school if I can! But for now, just saying, great work c:

Thanks(:

Thanks for the review(: