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I'll be the odd one out here and say I didn't really like these books. They were okay, but they were cliche (all the characters were unoriginal), and on top ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! Just so you know, I think the rules are that you should critique at least 2 pieces by other people before submitting your own, but ...

Hello and welcome, Jonathan94! Just so you know, technically the rules are that you should review 2 things before submitting your own work, but since you're new it's ok that ...

Hello and welcome, Hopeful_Youth! This is a good poem; I can tell that it has a deep personal meaning to you. There are a few technical problems though. but i ...

Good poem. I like what you called it, "Falling Faith." There are several technical points I noticed you could fix: Its a mere tale of two days It's a mere ...

Hello Lex. This is a sweet poem, and I like it. I've done a line-by-line critique below. ********* I want to believe that you are sincere But I am afraid ...

I've done a fairly detailed critique on your entire piece below. **** I am the ghost within the walls; I have lived in this house for countless years. And for ...

Inside a small farmhouse in the village of Shihong, to the North of China, sat a girl cross-legged on the floor. She was no more than sixteen, a book balanced ...

Wow. You use some fascinating language and imagery. I have to say this is one of the most interesting poems I've ever read. There is the major issue, though, of ...

I think the rules are that you should review at least 2 things before posting one of your own. Just so you know. About your poem: It's got a potentially ...

Sorry, but I'm going to say that after several readings, this poem strikes me as being too unoriginal. It's the cliche story of lovers who, somehow, aren't together anymore. The ...

Hello there, This is a decent poem, definitely. It has a good rhythm to it. However, the message and some of the wording seems a little cliche. Especially, "I'll drift ...

Hello, I thought this was really good. It's well written, and it flows well. I especially liked how descriptive your writing is. There aren't any spelling or grammar suggestions I ...

I loooove Neil Gaiman but I've never read Sandman because I've never really liked graphic novels. So many people talk about how good it is, though, so maybe I'll have ...

We can't say Eragon, Harry Potter, or Twilight? Aww. Those are my big three. I didn't like The Thorn Birds . (Forgot the author's name.) It might have been ok ...