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Re: Disacumen
Hey there. Just coming for a quick review. I love your story. I can easily see this becoming a much bigger story than it is here because its like you've ...
Jul 12, 2014 -
Re: Sparrows
Hey, I thought I would give a review since you reviewed mine. I really like this poem because of the emotion it symbolizes and kinda what it means behind it. ...
Jul 12, 2014 -
Re: Change?
I love it! I love it! I love it! This poem is so relate-able to ( I think ) nearly everybody. It is a great topic to choose to write ...
Jul 11, 2014 -
Re: Opinion of a Stifled Lover
Hello again. I just could not stay away from another poem of yours and I thought if you were not sick of my reviews already then I'm back. I could ...
Jul 11, 2014 -
Re: Grainy Fields
I love your style of poems that i've read. This is another great poem and I hope you continue writing like this because its great. "Grainy fields Left splattered with ...
Jul 11, 2014 -
Re: Drowning, Not Waving, Not Smiling
Just going to offer small review here. I dont have a good technical ability so I cant judge that. I like the idea you have gone with some of the ...
Jul 11, 2014 -
Re: deleted #2
Hello again! As soon as I woke up I went straight to chapter one and I love it! I love the character you are building up with Violet. It seems ...
Jul 10, 2014 -
Re: deleted #1
Hey Writer. Bit late for a review but I thought why not since im already hooked on the story. I can't wait to read the first chapter because you really ...
Jul 9, 2014 -
Re: The Signs: Chapter One, Refer to the Devil
Hey Jared, im back for more. I'm sorry to say Jared but after reading chapter one I am left disappointed because the prologue left you in a great position to ...
Jul 8, 2014 -
Re: The Signs: Prologue
You've got me hooked already. Its a great build-up and makes you want to read the first chapter straight away because it makes you ask so many questions and leaves ...
Jul 8, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 1: The Murder [EDITED]
I love this chapter. The chapter starts off great throwing you straight into the action making you want to read on about who this "she-demon" and why she is recieving ...
Jul 7, 2014
