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Scottylaa

Scottylaa

  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Disacumen

    Hey there. Just coming for a quick review. I love your story. I can easily see this becoming a much bigger story than it is here because its like you've ...

    Jul 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Science Re: Sparrows

    Hey, I thought I would give a review since you reviewed mine. I really like this poem because of the emotion it symbolizes and kinda what it means behind it. ...

    Jul 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: Change?

    I love it! I love it! I love it! This poem is so relate-able to ( I think ) nearly everybody. It is a great topic to choose to write ...

    Jul 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Narrative Re: Opinion of a Stifled Lover

    Hello again. I just could not stay away from another poem of yours and I thought if you were not sick of my reviews already then I'm back. I could ...

    Jul 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: Grainy Fields

    I love your style of poems that i've read. This is another great poem and I hope you continue writing like this because its great. "Grainy fields Left splattered with ...

    Jul 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Drowning, Not Waving, Not Smiling

    Just going to offer small review here. I dont have a good technical ability so I cant judge that. I like the idea you have gone with some of the ...

    Jul 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: deleted #2

    Hello again! As soon as I woke up I went straight to chapter one and I love it! I love the character you are building up with Violet. It seems ...

    Jul 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: deleted #1

    Hey Writer. Bit late for a review but I thought why not since im already hooked on the story. I can't wait to read the first chapter because you really ...

    Jul 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Signs: Chapter One, Refer to the Devil

    Hey Jared, im back for more. I'm sorry to say Jared but after reading chapter one I am left disappointed because the prologue left you in a great position to ...

    Jul 8, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Signs: Prologue

    You've got me hooked already. Its a great build-up and makes you want to read the first chapter straight away because it makes you ask so many questions and leaves ...

    Jul 8, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Politics Re: Chapter 1: The Murder [EDITED]

    I love this chapter. The chapter starts off great throwing you straight into the action making you want to read on about who this "she-demon" and why she is recieving ...

    Jul 7, 2014


Irrigation of the land with seawater desalinated by fusion power is ancient. It's called 'rain'.
— Michael McClary