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Scottylaa

Scottylaa

  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Disacumen

    Hey there. Just coming for a quick review. I love your story. I can easily see this becoming a much bigger story than it is here because its like you've ...

    Jul 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Science Re: Sparrows

    Hey, I thought I would give a review since you reviewed mine. I really like this poem because of the emotion it symbolizes and kinda what it means behind it. ...

    Jul 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: Change?

    I love it! I love it! I love it! This poem is so relate-able to ( I think ) nearly everybody. It is a great topic to choose to write ...

    Jul 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Narrative Re: Opinion of a Stifled Lover

    Hello again. I just could not stay away from another poem of yours and I thought if you were not sick of my reviews already then I'm back. I could ...

    Jul 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: Grainy Fields

    I love your style of poems that i've read. This is another great poem and I hope you continue writing like this because its great. "Grainy fields Left splattered with ...

    Jul 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Drowning, Not Waving, Not Smiling

    Just going to offer small review here. I dont have a good technical ability so I cant judge that. I like the idea you have gone with some of the ...

    Jul 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: deleted #2

    Hello again! As soon as I woke up I went straight to chapter one and I love it! I love the character you are building up with Violet. It seems ...

    Jul 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: deleted #1

    Hey Writer. Bit late for a review but I thought why not since im already hooked on the story. I can't wait to read the first chapter because you really ...

    Jul 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Signs: Chapter One, Refer to the Devil

    Hey Jared, im back for more. I'm sorry to say Jared but after reading chapter one I am left disappointed because the prologue left you in a great position to ...

    Jul 8, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Signs: Prologue

    You've got me hooked already. Its a great build-up and makes you want to read the first chapter straight away because it makes you ask so many questions and leaves ...

    Jul 8, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Politics Re: Chapter 1: The Murder [EDITED]

    I love this chapter. The chapter starts off great throwing you straight into the action making you want to read on about who this "she-demon" and why she is recieving ...

    Jul 7, 2014


You own everything that happened to you. Tell your stories. If people wanted you to write warmly about them, they should have behaved better.
— Anne Lamott