ScottieRAWR

Thank you for the kind words. I didn't realise until I wrote it that I used ache twice... ^.^" The Saint, is a joke between friends. There are more to ...

Absolute win! It's nice to see a poem that isn't cliched. And it's a haiku! Just Win!

I don't think anyone really knows how to review a Haiku, other than counting the syllables and saying. "Yes, that is a haiku"

Damn you! You had to leave me on a cliff hanger. Please write more soon. I can't wait to see what's next. Good imagery. You should get this stuff published

Definitely an amazing piece of work. Some bits I was slightly lost but I'm easy to lose in stories. I liked the way you described Isabella. Nice stucture. All in ...

Excellent. But still very sad. I love the way it's gone from serene to suddenly very dark.

Seriously, please. Use the poetic abilities for happier things. While yes the poetic imagery was powerful I'm sure you can write about something less sad than a lonely girl self ...

Now that was powerful poetry. You have serious talent Dora. But please write about something more happy next time.

Very well done, I love the way you're showing that being ignored by the person you love can hurt more than having them insult you. Please write more

That was simply amazing. While yes it was very sad I loved the imagery and point of the poem. It's just such a shame that he broke your heart. Please ...

That certainly was one of the most random andfunny things I've ever read. Please keep posting.

I don't really understand how God could save you from a class. But haveing said that I'm pessimistic. It had good imagery though.

That was an incredible piece of writing. In my mind a couple of bits were questionable but considering they made the poem rhyme it works.