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Hey there Warlord! This was a really beautiful and interesting piece. I do have several nitpicks though. NITPICKING TIME!!! Bounded in these chains,---> Now this part is fine but what ...

I really love Adventure Time and I was really excited about this! I didn't really notice any grammar or punctual issues. Which is good! This was especially interesting since it's ...

This gaze me chills, I can't wait for the next chapter! I do have a few possible nitpicks though. Time [the the] thread that interlocks them together? (the in the ...

Oh gods, this is so depressing. I could feel the emotion put into this poem. I feel like a jerk now because, whenever I see someone died on the news ...

Hey there! Scarlet here to review! First off I have a list of nitpicks: NITPICKING TIME!!! I, who once reigned over the seas, Have let the one I adored, you, ...

Hey there! Scarlet here for review! I personally did like this poem but I do have a few nitpicks. NITPICKING TIME!!!!! -I don't like how this poem is so repetitive, ...

Hey there! Scarlet here to review! I can say I was both dumbfounded and amazed when I read this! It had me hooked on the spot, I read about 5 ...

Hey! Scarlet here to review! I just can't wait to see what the 2nd chapter is like. This was wonderful! I can tell you spend a good deal of time ...

Hello there! Scarlet here too review! I think you did a decent job on this poem. I really like it when people make a story with they're poems instead of ...

Hey there Aurora! Scarlet here too review! Usually I don't care much for stuff like this but this time, it caught my attention right off the bat. I love the ...

Hi there! Scarlet here with a review! I really don't have much to say since it's so short. Frankly I was disappointed that it was only four lines long. I ...

Hello there! Scarlet here to review. I personally liked the message given in this poem. Every line made sense to me, I felt as if I was the one who ...

Hello There! Scarlet here too review! First off I love the emotional reference put into this poem. I do have a few nitpicks though. NITPICKING TIME!!! My anger takes form ...

Hello there! Scarlet here to review! I'll start off with the nitpicks. NITPICKING TIME!!!! The endless hordes were overwhelming, his ammo was nearly depleted, his energy was dying away with ...

Hello! Scarlet here to review! I somewhat liked this, but personally I didn't really find it funny. That's just me though, I'm sure others like it. Besides that you did ...