Satira

Hi, Grav! Satira here for a review! I think you have a natural sense of pacing, which is definitely a gift- You know where to move a story along, and ...

Hi! Satira here on behalf of Stitch, here for a review! Since I haven't read any earlier installments of this story, I hope you'll forgive me for any slip-ups pertaining ...

Hello! Satira here on the behalf of team Stitch, for a review! I'm really not caught up to this, but for what I can say, the writing here is very ...

Haha...gah this made me feel terrible about the future! Good job! So, Satira here for team Stitch, here for a review. Well, I liked this, but I think some things ...

Hi! I really liked this sentiment- I really, really liked it. The way you focus on a small thing and make it suddenly sound like... a world... is amazing and ...

Hi! I don't agree with Jay. I liked this. I'm not one for nitpicks, so I'll only go over the things that stood out to me that could stand to ...

You know what, I liked this! It has a certain rhythm. You have the soul of a poet. I'm not...sure exactly what this means, but I have a feeling it ...

Hello! Sorry you had to wait so long for a review! I also apologize that I haven't read your previous chapters, so I hope you'll excuse me if I criticize ...

Hello! Sorry you had to wait so long for a second review! I, personally, hate to nitpick when reviewing, because it usually doesn't improve the story. Good spelling does not ...

Hello! So sorry you've had to wait this long for a second review! hm... You know, poetry doesn't have to rhyme, but what it does need is rhythm. And this ...

Hi again!! I like how this story is progressing, and now I see that B is not a star, but some sort-a space guy... somespecies or other. I wish that ...

Hi! I like this story! It reminded me a bit of 'The Little Prince', because the name of the star the little prince lived on was 'astroid B-612'. or something ...

HI!!!! You were in the WWFF thread! So I gotta review your thing! I just revisited percy jackson, so my memory is still fresh with his sarcastic comments. but I ...

hi! first off, the scene you painted was really vivid. I really liked that you had it in your head and it was like you were describing something that was ...

I'm not christian, but I do know a bit about christianity, and 'll try to be as open as I can about this and review it without judgement. It's pretty ...