Sassafras

Hello, Sumi! Great poem, really funny, but the only problem is that this isn't a haiku. I read the comments below mine though, and it seems that someone's already pointed ...

Hello, confetti! May I just say that I absolutely love the opening. The imagery in it was amazing and captivating. The ending lines of the introduction invoke the right type ...

Hello, Dreamy! First of all, I'm not sure if this was just an editing mistake or whatever, but I'm choosing to point it out anyway. I stepped out of my ...

Hello, ancientforever. When I first started reading this I have to admit that I nearly stopped. This poem definitely has a slow start, but the last couplet really makes it ...

Hello, mephistophelesangel! First of everything, I suggest breaking this up into more sections. Opening up a story link and finding one giant paragraph is really off-putting. Nice and neat little ...

Hello, Cecily. :D The first thing I noticed was that this prologue was comprised mostly of telling statements, which is not something that you want in a novel - especially ...

Hello, Persy. When I first tried to read this poem, it got away from me. I couldn't keep up with the words, my mind was scrabbled, and nothing made much ...

Helo, Indee. Something about your poem is really appealing. I can't say what it is exactly, though, as they two stanzas didn't exactly fit together at first glance, and I ...

Hello, Kiran. Usual disclaimer: I'm not really the best poetry editor. This will be mostly opinions and suggestions. Highlights Corrections There are some things in life That cannot be described ...

Hello, misstoria! Okay, now I'm going to give my usual disclaimer. I'm not a poetry savvy. Anything having to do with the grammatical workings of a poem, outside that placement ...

Hello there, spacesolider. Whoa there, sweetheart, you've got absolutely no punctuation here. No problem, really, as I see that another has already pointed that out to you. I'm here, however, ...

Hello, Deli! "Mandy, don't worry about a thing , " Antonia whispered softly into Mandy's ear. All quotations, when exiting from speaking to narration, should be accompanied by a comma ...

Hello, LLST. Happy Review Day! :) First, grammar. That's just the way things work with me. Now, let me warn you, I don't know much about the grammatical workings of ...

Hello, Emoticon. First of all, I want to start by saying I absolutely adore creepypasta and nosleep stories. I read them far more often than what can been seen as ...

Hello Ingrid, Reise here to review. Corrections Removals/Highlights Let's jump right into it then. The first way , was that it was actually a three panel mirror, designed to show ...