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Hello, Princess. Just a few nitpicks before I get on with my commentary. “It is way to early to o be up,” Ethan grumbled, handing his father the bright green ...

Hello, Rawr. I agree with both Lauren and Lena. This could be a very interesting story if you would just get a likely unlikely way she could get pregnant. Man, ...

Hello, Kosal. Kudos on posting this. Finially, someone is giving a shout out to hard working moms everywhere. This is well written save for a few minor mistakes, but the ...

Hello! This was so cute and funny. Dreaming of the day when you'll wake up and find that, Princess Leia, will want to smack your behind. This made me choke ...

Hello, Inspired. I'll be your reviewer today. The moon was full, and bright as ever. You don't need the comma. i could hear the gentle hum of his breathing. Capitalize ...

Heelo, Durrie! He found the man to be ‘Blue’, called that because of his red hair. Oxymoron, gotta love it. This story was very nice and even a bit sad. ...

Hello, Sierra. He just wished he could have made it another month, to turn seventeen. This is really sad. She grasped one of her his cold hands in her own ...

Hello, Mermeid! Reise here for a review. Okay, first of all, the title bothers me. Just capitalize the 'M' in "mrs" and put a period behind the 'S'. You also ...

Hello, Loveless. Reise here to review your entry. This was a nice read, in my limited time being here, I haven't seen many post like this on Yws. I've never ...

Hello, Razzle. Reise here to review. I love how you have the hidden message inside of your poem. That was really creative and when I actually found it, it made ...

Hello, Writer. I need you to here , I need you to see , so wont you listen dear , when you come home to me. I read this piece ...

Hello, Waterlily. This was well written, though at times I could not understand a single thing Juliet was saying. There are, however, too many "O Romeo" bits in this entry. ...

Hello, Sakura. I'll be reviewing this for you today. :) I was one of the most against suicide people you could meet. This sounds awkward. Instead of saying "most against ...

Hello, NYC. I'll be your reviewer today. Stand ing up and putting some money on the table, she looked around the cafe, as if it hurt to say goodbye. There ...

Hello, Creative. No life surrounding us to make a sound, just the waves, in, and out , carrying my thoughts to the depths of the sea. Above us , the ...