Sorry for writing something sooooo unbelievable. My excuse for that was - anything can happen. It's fiction. But if you insist, I changed how she got knocked up. It IS possible to get pregnant from heavy petting.
I didn't think it could happen to me - getting pregnant without penetration. I knew it was possible, albeit very rare. I just refused to acknowledge the fact that I could become pregnant from that thing called "heavy petting." But it did, because there I was, standing in my bathroom, pregnancy test in hand, staring at the digitalized words "pregnant." I couldn't believe it; I didn't want to believe it, but I had to. I was pregnant.
It happened to me.
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Hello, Rawr.
I agree with both Lauren and Lena. This could be a very interesting story if you would just get a likely unlikely way she could get pregnant. Man, that sounds really confusing, but I suppose you get what I mean. Maybe the condom can break, that's not very uncommon but it's something. If you do find some more realistic ways and decide to post this again, I would love to read it.
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Hey there Cathy!
This sounds like a prologue, is it?
It's pretty good for a prologue, with length and content and such. It gives some info immediately important to the reader, but doesn't dump a bunch of useless info on them.
The only thing is it's pretty unrealistic.
This is the most unrealistic thing of it all. Like Lena pointed out, it pretty much couldn't happen this way. Though, with some adjustments you could still but your character here into a situation where she could get pregnant and it could still be unlikely.
I suggest doing some research into unlikely ways for someone to get pregnant. You might find something that would make a really interesting story!
Good luck!
-Lauren-
It's impossible to get pregnant from dry sex.
Sorry to ruin your whole story, but the guy would have had to blow a giant load right over her vagina, and the boxers would have had to be very thin, and she would have to be very loose.
It's definitely not possible haha.