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SarahMazer

  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Pangs of past

    I love this poem! It has great rhyming and rythym and ut is very lyricial. I think everyone can relate to this just friends but I want to be more ...

    Jan 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Everything

    This poem is very good! Most girls think they're not worthy of a guy's affection, which is what your poem seems to be about. I like the first stanza the ...

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Nightmares

    I like this poem! The idea of a nightmare so terrifying gives me the chills. I was relieved when the narrator woke up, and laughed at thinking momentarily the dream ...

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Brand New Eyes

    This poem is really good! The last stanza is my favorite, the lines " I know I'm too young and you do too" warm the heart. Too often people only ...

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: So Long

    This is the best poem I"ve read on here! I absolutely love the last stanza, the last two lines especially. Before I read them, I thought maybe the person had ...

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Soul Music

    I like this very much. I like the words kaleidoscope of stars. This is my favorite part: The cello speaks to me. Unique radiant warmth Just for me, Just for ...

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: -taken down-

    This is very good! I don't understand the last stanza, but I like the last line. I like the idea of unearthing the truth behind plastered smiles, finding misery in ...

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Short Story » Romantic, Review Re: Forever and Always

    This is very sweet! Love is very hard to capture in words, but you did a very good of it here!It's obvious how much the two character care about eachother. ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: the Poet writes as follows...

    I like this alot! It's silly, but in a refreshing way! Keep writing

    Dec 30, 2012


“All stories are true," Skarpi said. "But this one really happened, if that's what you mean.”
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind