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Re: Pangs of past
I love this poem! It has great rhyming and rythym and ut is very lyricial. I think everyone can relate to this just friends but I want to be more ...
Jan 25, 2013 -
Re: Everything
This poem is very good! Most girls think they're not worthy of a guy's affection, which is what your poem seems to be about. I like the first stanza the ...
Dec 31, 2012 -
Re: Nightmares
I like this poem! The idea of a nightmare so terrifying gives me the chills. I was relieved when the narrator woke up, and laughed at thinking momentarily the dream ...
Dec 31, 2012 -
Re: Brand New Eyes
This poem is really good! The last stanza is my favorite, the lines " I know I'm too young and you do too" warm the heart. Too often people only ...
Dec 31, 2012 -
Re: So Long
This is the best poem I"ve read on here! I absolutely love the last stanza, the last two lines especially. Before I read them, I thought maybe the person had ...
Dec 31, 2012 -
Re: Soul Music
I like this very much. I like the words kaleidoscope of stars. This is my favorite part: The cello speaks to me. Unique radiant warmth Just for me, Just for ...
Dec 31, 2012 -
Re: -taken down-
This is very good! I don't understand the last stanza, but I like the last line. I like the idea of unearthing the truth behind plastered smiles, finding misery in ...
Dec 31, 2012 -
Re: Forever and Always
This is very sweet! Love is very hard to capture in words, but you did a very good of it here!It's obvious how much the two character care about eachother. ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: the Poet writes as follows...
I like this alot! It's silly, but in a refreshing way! Keep writing
Dec 30, 2012
