Sapi

Hiya! Sapi here as I promised (sorry it took me so long...). So. Good job! You're right, I really did enjoy this little piece, and it most certainly made me ...

Hi to you! I be Sapi. Good job on this! I like your flow, your word choice, etc. One thing in general about this poem is that, well....it's not terribly ...

Heya! Sapi to review! ;) I have to say this poem truly moved me. Like, truly. I find your style of description wanting of pretty much nothing, as well being ...

Hi there! This here's Sapi. :P I have to say this poem pretty much confused me more than it touched me. I feel like if it was clearer, or maybe ...

Hi there! Sapi here. :) My review shall go inside your poem. "There are memories I treasure, some that I resent, some of blissful pleasure, and some of sad torment." ...

Hey there! Sapi to review. :) I'll just put my comments in with the poem. " Yesterday’s yesterday, I found a box Buried in the park Under a rose bush." ...

Hi again! :) This review will be a little bit shorter.  I'll just give you a general overview. So the only punctuation, flow problem I have been noticing is that ...

Hey there buddy! :) I figure I might get a start on reviewing your poems, so here I am! I'm sorry for the dissection of your might get a little ...

I just want to say- wow! I think this was a remarkable piece of writing and I can tell you worked hard at it. There are a couple things you ...

A comment as requested! :) I think you have potential, but don't seem to have much training. Unless this is a completely different style of poetry than what we normally ...

Hullo there! Sapi here to the rescue. :) I know you posted this a while ago, but just saw it so lonely here and I think this definitely deserves a ...

Hello again! I saw this recommended for me when I logged on, and I was like, "Indieeloise wrote something! Yay!!" So yeah, here I am. Congratulations on getting accepted into ...

Wow. I totally just gotta say wow. Really amazing poem. :) Okay, so first off, the two things that stood out most for me were your rhythm and rhyme. I ...

Hey there! Okay, so overall, this poem has the start of what could be wonderful inspiration and a good topic, but it just needs a lot of work to get ...

Hey there! I'll just put my comments in between the quoted paragraphs below... "I've only ever heard of one hobby that you never stop learning how to do." Well, okay, ...