Sam

working on it...:D

HAH! I JUST REALIZED! I'M OUT OF MY WRITER'S BLOCK!!! YEAH!!! GO ME! *whoops. drastic moment. something IS rotten in the state of Denmark.*

Heh...Hekategirl, you're a lot better than me. (i think you all could agree on that...)

I've never actually seen it...just read it. where do you think I got my sig, all you shakespeare fans? (the last line)

Hey, this was pretty cool! Only, get rid of the exclamation points. This is a too sort of deep/serious piece for them. They don't fit. Other than that...well...not much!

Definitely agree with Bobo. and even the German by itself is very beautiful.

Oh my gosh Wulie...this proves it...you've ALWAYS been a poet, and you ALWAYS will! You are soooo good at endings...the rest of your poems are kind of 'well, Ok' but ...

Oh...I know it, Dreaming Mouse! that was so cool...oh my gosh no critique!

Wu, any voice losing in this I couldn't catch...although this is coming from one of the poetry-challenged, was pretty cool. No critique. :D

join the club...I have to say I thought they were interesting, Hawk! Since they're kind of raw and obviously very personal, I'm not going to critique them. Critting emails? That's ...

wow...I thought this was really cool. Although I don't have any criticism, all I can say is this- this will stay in my mind for a looong time. well done!

stop...being...chatty...gah! That's what i'm trying to do, trying to find my own style...I'm just not as into it as I used to be...

well, I'm just imitating for now...trying to get back into the poetic rut. :D

very witty...prickly. :D I'm frantically going through to try and find something to nag you about but there's nothing...cool poem, anyway.

That does sound interesting...although he sounds like he's lacking all the good stuff. :D english teacher would be ashamed!